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Struggle

Summer days may linger, 
push hard to stop night’s fall.
But the sad truth remains,
darkness will take us all

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Silent One

January 31, 2024 at 12:13 PM

yes and that is why we need to search for the light... you only drown if you stay in the water my friend..

Karen Jones

January 31, 2024 at 1:00 AM

Ah but there is light at the end of the darkness. Depends on perspective perhaps. The glass is half full or half empty? Even if half empty it is an opportunity to fill it with more of what we thirst for right? Love how you inspire thought with this one Jerry!

Jerry Brotherton

January 31, 2024 at 10:48 AM

You are so right Karen. As the saying goes, when one door closes, another opens. That goes for death also. Have a wonderful day, my friend.