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Struck the Strings of My Heart

You came and looted my heart I didn't own it, you stopped it from falling apart Executing easily such heist And leaving me with thirst For your sinful hands again to struck the strings of my heart Your glances leave me longing Your stares leave me shivering A touch of your soft hands makes the flames inside of me burning I am owned by none other I am tamed by you forever Forever baby ain't enough , me and you surely know Even if your fire eat me alive, I won't let go Keep me in your beating heart Let forever always be the place to start Playing peek-a-boo with my pines Playing hide and seek with your signs You come and go Killing me slow Oh criminal ! You got me enslaved You hacked my heart and make me crave Wonder how you have that innocent eye When you make my passion cry I wonder how my wings are broken but still can fly Wonder how my wounds are open, but you refuse to let me dieI t's healing me by the warmth of your side It's too obvious to the universe that your love is immortal in my veins , there's no way to hide You've murdered my self control And sent me burning in coal Holy criminal! That's what you are I won't sue you, please give me more scars COLLABORATION WITH SHAHEIN DALIA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/22/2016 6:03:00 AM
This gem sizes my breath. Lovely poem...........A.M.
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White Sage
Date: 10/10/2016 4:02:00 PM
thanks A.M, am sorry for the late reply and am glad our blockbuster love thrilled you.
Date: 9/4/2016 3:09:00 AM
Oh I say wow sensational and creative the theft of the heart in romantic expert rhyming. I get bored of the usual love poems but this is unique n entertains to boot. But it also seems to have some dark intense lines which is of course poetic. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse
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White Sage
Date: 10/10/2016 4:09:00 PM
your comment gives me a kick Zaynab, though you should keep your heart well hidden lol less the rhymes may get attracted to it. I hope you're doing well, best wishes to you.
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White Sage
Date: 10/10/2016 4:06:00 PM
your comment gives me a kick Zaynab, though you should keep your heart well hidden lol less the rhymes may get attracted to it. I hope you're doing well, best wishes to you.
Date: 6/2/2016 5:21:00 AM
Hello, White sage. Not seen you in a while...So I thought I would pop in and pay my respects. Hope everything is going well and you are feeling fit and healthy. An excellent poem - I much enjoyed the read. My very best regards! :) john
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White Sage
Date: 10/10/2016 4:08:00 PM
yeah, am as healthy as a bouncing ball. fortunately, no boot is kicking me lol. I hope all is well with you? I really do appreciate you checking up on me...well, am back to add some ingredients to soup, am not a good cook though lol. thanks so so much John
Date: 5/4/2016 7:19:00 AM
It's lovely, and somewhat lyrical - very passionate romanticism...
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White Sage
Date: 10/10/2016 4:24:00 PM
thanks Michael... I believe it takes an artistically romantic person to recognise romanticism. am sorry the reply took long. best wishes to you
Date: 4/28/2016 5:30:00 AM
I love the closure.... nicely written
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White Sage
Date: 10/10/2016 4:26:00 PM
greetings Andrew, it's thrilling to know you like the closure so much, your comments gives us both a nice feel, thanks. I hope you're doing good, best wishes to you.
Date: 4/2/2016 1:25:00 PM
Wow! What a great post, I enjoy the read.........A.M.
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White Sage
Date: 4/3/2016 11:04:00 AM
thanks so much dear A.M, your comment is greatly appreciated
Date: 4/1/2016 3:06:00 PM
- A wonderful poems from both of you ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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White Sage
Date: 4/1/2016 6:00:00 PM
thanks so much Anne, your comment is greatly welcomed. we appreciate it so much
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White Sage
Date: 4/1/2016 6:00:00 PM
thanks so much Anne, your comment is greatly welcomed. we appreciate it so much
Date: 3/13/2016 7:56:00 PM
wow, so great to see you again, White Sage, and this is nicely done with Shahein! Keep writing. WE need to see lots more new poems from you.
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White Sage
Date: 3/17/2016 4:03:00 AM
i surely do hope to write more from now, i'm glad i had a collaboration with her again, we appreciate your comment Andrea
Date: 3/13/2016 5:02:00 PM
Sage, you both did a fantastic with with collab, and I am loving it 7 ~
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White Sage
Date: 3/17/2016 3:57:00 AM
thanks BW, we're glad you loved the write, really appreciate that
Date: 3/13/2016 12:39:00 PM
glad to read you again, an impassioned write and fine collab, WS..huggs
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White Sage
Date: 3/17/2016 3:55:00 AM
thanks Nette, we appreciate your lovely comment, Dalia's done the best putting in her words
Date: 3/11/2016 8:01:00 PM
What a fabulous collaboration...you weaved this very well
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White Sage
Date: 3/17/2016 3:21:00 AM
thanks so much Tim, we appreciate that lovely comment

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