White Sage Poet Romanticism

Struck the Strings of My Heart

You came and looted my heart
I didn't own it, you stopped it from falling apart
Executing easily such heist
And leaving me with thirst
For your sinful hands again to struck the strings of my heart


Your glances leave me longing
Your stares leave me shivering
A touch of your soft hands makes the flames inside of me burning
I am owned by none other
I am tamed by you forever


Forever baby ain't enough , me and you surely know
Even if your fire eat me alive, I won't let go
Keep me in your beating heart
Let forever always be the place to start


Playing peek-a-boo with my pines
Playing hide and seek with your signs
You come and go
Killing me slow


Oh criminal ! You got me enslaved
You hacked my heart and make me crave
Wonder how you have that innocent eye
When you make my passion cry


I wonder how my wings are broken but still can fly
Wonder how my wounds are open, but you refuse to let me dieI
t's healing me by the warmth of your side
It's too obvious to the universe that your love is immortal in my veins , there's no way to hide


You've murdered my self control
And sent me burning in coal
Holy criminal! That's what you are
I won't sue you, please give me more scars


COLLABORATION WITH SHAHEIN DALIA

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Afolabi Muideen September 22, 2016 at 6:03 AM This gem sizes my breath. Lovely poem...........A.M. White Sage October 10, 2016 at 4:02 PM thanks A.M, am sorry for the late reply and am glad our blockbuster love thrilled you.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri September 4, 2016 at 3:09 AM Oh I say wow sensational and creative the theft of the heart in romantic expert rhyming. I get bored of the usual love poems but this is unique n entertains to boot. But it also seems to have some dark intense lines which is of course poetic. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse White Sage October 10, 2016 at 4:09 PM your comment gives me a kick Zaynab, though you should keep your heart well hidden lol less the rhymes may get attracted to it. I hope you're doing well, best wishes to you. White Sage October 10, 2016 at 4:06 PM your comment gives me a kick Zaynab, though you should keep your heart well hidden lol less the rhymes may get attracted to it. I hope you're doing well, best wishes to you.

John Fleming June 2, 2016 at 5:21 AM Hello, White sage. Not seen you in a while...So I thought I would pop in and pay my respects. Hope everything is going well and you are feeling fit and healthy. An excellent poem - I much enjoyed the read. My very best regards! :) john White Sage October 10, 2016 at 4:08 PM yeah, am as healthy as a bouncing ball. fortunately, no boot is kicking me lol. I hope all is well with you? I really do appreciate you checking up on me...well, am back to add some ingredients to soup, am not a good cook though lol. thanks so so much John

Michael Whatley May 4, 2016 at 7:19 AM It's lovely, and somewhat lyrical - very passionate romanticism... White Sage October 10, 2016 at 4:24 PM thanks Michael... I believe it takes an artistically romantic person to recognise romanticism. am sorry the reply took long. best wishes to you

Ad. Andrew Joseph April 28, 2016 at 5:30 AM I love the closure.... nicely written White Sage October 10, 2016 at 4:26 PM greetings Andrew, it's thrilling to know you like the closure so much, your comments gives us both a nice feel, thanks. I hope you're doing good, best wishes to you.

Afolabi Muideen April 2, 2016 at 1:25 PM Wow! What a great post, I enjoy the read.........A.M. White Sage April 3, 2016 at 11:04 AM thanks so much dear A.M, your comment is greatly appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2016 at 3:06 PM - A wonderful poems from both of you ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Sage April 1, 2016 at 6:00 PM thanks so much Anne, your comment is greatly welcomed. we appreciate it so much White Sage April 1, 2016 at 6:00 PM thanks so much Anne, your comment is greatly welcomed. we appreciate it so much

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:56 PM wow, so great to see you again, White Sage, and this is nicely done with Shahein! Keep writing. WE need to see lots more new poems from you. White Sage March 17, 2016 at 4:03 AM i surely do hope to write more from now, i'm glad i had a collaboration with her again, we appreciate your comment Andrea

Constance La France March 13, 2016 at 5:02 PM Sage, you both did a fantastic with with collab, and I am loving it 7 ~ White Sage March 17, 2016 at 3:57 AM thanks BW, we're glad you loved the write, really appreciate that

Nette Onclaud March 13, 2016 at 12:39 PM glad to read you again, an impassioned write and fine collab, WS..huggs White Sage March 17, 2016 at 3:55 AM thanks Nette, we appreciate your lovely comment, Dalia's done the best putting in her words

Tim Smith March 11, 2016 at 8:01 PM What a fabulous collaboration...you weaved this very well White Sage March 17, 2016 at 3:21 AM thanks so much Tim, we appreciate that lovely comment