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December.7. 2024
 Making Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Kai Michael Neumann

 

He stood before me a beacon casting light that kept me burning. How we wished to be in perfect harmony in body and spirit, transcending all bounds. As he gazed on my face, I saw waves of emotion rise and crash in his deep almond eyes, and I became a river hurtling down to join the mighty current. When he whispered to me, honeyed words of passion in the enormity of silence, I blossomed into a red tulip of love. As he played on the strings of my heart's violin, I got tuned into an alluring symphony. When he held my palms, I evolved into a beautiful painting on a blank canvas. When he cupped my face to stamp on my lips the seal of love, I became a flitting butterfly. When he lifted me up in his arms, all the stars came down to see the spark in my eyes wondering if it outdid their combined luster I continued looking deep into his eyes and he into mine, our souls mingling and melding in a sensuous indulgence!

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Date: 12/17/2024 5:10:00 AM
A beautifully penned love poem. Awesome read! Congratulations dear Valsa on your win. All the best.
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Date: 12/8/2024 4:07:00 AM
Hi Valsa loved this so romantic. Good luck with the contest, my friend. Stay Blessed.
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Date: 12/7/2024 10:22:00 AM
Wow. Quite an amorous poem. Beautiful.
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Date: 12/7/2024 6:21:00 AM
Valsa Your great poetry delves into the tremendous emotional and spiritual connection between two lovers, demonstrating the transformational power of love. It invokes images of oneness, harmony, and transcendence, demonstrating how love may enhance the human experience. The poem also focuses on the personal moments shared by two lovers, stressing their emotional and physical connection. It depicts love as a power that strengthens one's sense of self, resulting in personal and mutual progress. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 12/6/2024 10:54:00 PM
This is so precious, Valsa. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/6/2024 10:30:00 PM
Quite a romantic verse Valsa, there's no escaping Cupids arrow. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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