Struck By Awareness

I was in study hall doing my homework when it first
Manifested and it was as if I was possessed for my
Pencil had a mind of it's own and the paperwork
Formerly known as Algebra became excited scribbles
Darting back and forth and up the sides wherever
There was any room and as a wry grin appeared
On my face I began to realize what I had been
Jotting down on little scraps of memory had indeed
Come full circle after all these seemingly long years and
I had been using words purposely!What a revelation!
I remembered the shoe boxes full of words that sat
High up on shelves,secreted away from prying
Motherly or brotherly eyes and gotten down
From time to time to be examined with careful
Scrutiny as to what events and pictures in my
Mind's eye had been deciphered or thought of
And still I did not know there was a real term
For what I had been doing all this time in my
Young life and now I knew as I approached my
Seventeenth birthday that besides being afraid of
Teenage boys,report cards that weren't up to par
And hard-nosed parents who found grievances 
Everywhere it seemed,and early development that
Embarrassed me,I actually had something awesome
Going for me in my troubled life-I was a poet!









**for contest "Epiphanies" 
sponsored by Desiree Birdseye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/21/2011 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Desiree's contest "Epiphanies". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:21:00 PM
Hi Deb - Great sentiments. "I was a POET!" You ARE a poet...and a good one! Congratulations on your WIN in Desiree's contest. Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 1/30/2011 12:30:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your HM in the Epiphanies contest with this brilliant write and entry my friend.. enjoy a special honor with luv..
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2011 3:28:00 PM
Deb, this is wonderful. I did not know it until I was 45, about ten years ago! I always knew I could write, but poetry?? Who'd have thunk it? Hey, I love this one. Congratulations!!
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Date: 1/29/2011 3:19:00 PM
wonderful ! congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 1/29/2011 3:01:00 PM
This was a true epiphany and you tell it so well. Soup Mail. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/6/2011 8:42:00 AM
It is remarkable when in hinds sight you see the path that led you to today, Deb! Good entry for the contest! Best of luck with this winner. Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/6/2011 5:44:00 AM
funny write...great epiphany!
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Date: 1/6/2011 5:31:00 AM
how wonderful this made me feel. and as i read i saw the clues that you had real talent. it's only now that you have given to me the epiphany that the journals i kept for years and years many years would find me being a poet. well i must say of all i read today, this was the most inspiring. John Henry Loving III
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