Strong Wind Gusts

strong wind gusts fourty mile an hour breeze.. rains red oak acorns

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Bl Devnath

Date: 11/4/2012 7:26:00 AM

Nice imagery, wonderfully worded. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/31/2012 3:49:00 PM

I bet they were flying in the wind. Acorn storm. We will hand out treats at the door. Not sure how many to expect as it is cool out. love phyl

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/30/2012 12:07:00 PM

Excellent write Sara. You have given nice colors to what the wind is trying and doing at so many places. Beautiful imagery. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/30/2012 10:40:00 AM

oh this is brilliant Sara, the imagery is superb

Brittany Reynolds

Date: 10/29/2012 3:16:00 PM

Lovely imagery. Of course, we have slightly stronger gusts here. Your might intensify as it gets closer to you. Stay safe.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/29/2012 12:01:00 PM

The storm is just about tohit NYC. Hope it just knocks down aorns but Sandy seems more powerful than that. Keep it up! Peacew & Love Matthew Anish

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/29/2012 8:20:00 AM

This describes the Sandy we got perfectly. Much wind. little rain, lots of branches and acorns.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/29/2012 8:14:00 AM

We are bracing for Sandy now though we will only get about the same 40 mile and hour winds with gusts up to 60 miles and hour! Though most of it will be within the next few days! We will sure get a lot of rain though, hope there won't be a flood! We should be alright though where we are...we haven't had a flood around here since we moved here many years ago! This poem is perfect for what is going on right now my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! Great Work!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/29/2012 7:53:00 AM

very nice! i like the image of the red acorns raining down...