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Strong Sea

In the rampant wave’s roar
Turbid, murky  and furious 
I see the cosmic light glows
Surrounding everywhere.

Nel ruggito del'onda
Torbida e furibonda
Brilla la luce cosmica 
Che ovunque mi circonda.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/17/2013 4:33:00 PM

nicely done ;}

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/17/2013 11:56:00 PM

Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2013 8:49:00 AM

Hello Mario, enjoying this poem once again..... you gave the sea character, in such might the waves crash and dash, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/16/2013 10:21:00 AM

Thank you for coming again, Linda. Being a destroyer you have built much on this site!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/13/2013 1:32:00 PM

This definitely describes the power of the sea in all its beauty..wilderness..light and glory..Charma

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/16/2013 10:19:00 AM

Happy to be able with my modest knowledge of the language to describe some aspects of nature which are part of my life. Thank you for the encouragement

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 6/13/2013 12:40:00 PM

I read all the comments made below. I am sure you have not only painted but also made an action movie through your words. It is the feeling I get when I read your poem. Thank you Mario for your generous comments. Hugs my friend

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/13/2013 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Manel, I like to write, but I enjoy reading good poems like yours

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/11/2013 4:28:00 PM

Molto buono!

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/12/2013 3:34:00 AM

Grazie, Robert, thank you for visiting

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2013 4:16:00 PM

Great images. Is that Italian I am seeing?

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/10/2013 9:01:00 AM

Yes it is italian, but I am not so sure that the english version is as impressive as in my mother language. Thank you for the kind comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 11:35:00 AM

Good afternoon, Mario a wonderful glow... a very pleasing image.. i love the sea and it's raging noise... love..Linda

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/10/2013 9:05:00 AM

I answer late, Linda due to the time zone. You are always welcome to my modest poetry. I try to do my best with a language which is not mine, but I am becoming more confident with. Thanks to soupers!