Mario De Paz Poet Rhyme

Strong Sea

In the rampant wave’s roar
Turbid, murky  and furious 
I see the cosmic light glows
Surrounding everywhere.

Nel ruggito del'onda
Torbida e furibonda
Brilla la luce cosmica 
Che ovunque mi circonda.

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Debbie Duncan June 17, 2013 at 4:33 PM nicely done ;} Mario De Paz June 17, 2013 at 11:56 PM Thank you

Poet Destroyer A June 15, 2013 at 8:49 AM Hello Mario, enjoying this poem once again..... you gave the sea character, in such might the waves crash and dash, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda Mario De Paz June 16, 2013 at 10:21 AM Thank you for coming again, Linda. Being a destroyer you have built much on this site!

Charmaine Chircop June 13, 2013 at 1:32 PM This definitely describes the power of the sea in all its beauty..wilderness..light and glory..Charma Mario De Paz June 16, 2013 at 10:19 AM Happy to be able with my modest knowledge of the language to describe some aspects of nature which are part of my life. Thank you for the encouragement

Manel Gunatillake June 13, 2013 at 12:40 PM I read all the comments made below. I am sure you have not only painted but also made an action movie through your words. It is the feeling I get when I read your poem. Thank you Mario for your generous comments. Hugs my friend Mario De Paz June 13, 2013 at 1:11 PM Thank you Manel, I like to write, but I enjoy reading good poems like yours

Robert Pettit June 11, 2013 at 4:28 PM Molto buono! Mario De Paz June 12, 2013 at 3:34 AM Grazie, Robert, thank you for visiting

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2013 at 4:16 PM Great images. Is that Italian I am seeing? Mario De Paz June 10, 2013 at 9:01 AM Yes it is italian, but I am not so sure that the english version is as impressive as in my mother language. Thank you for the kind comment

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2013 at 11:35 AM Good afternoon, Mario a wonderful glow... a very pleasing image.. i love the sea and it's raging noise... love..Linda Mario De Paz June 10, 2013 at 9:05 AM I answer late, Linda due to the time zone. You are always welcome to my modest poetry. I try to do my best with a language which is not mine, but I am becoming more confident with. Thanks to soupers!

Kim Van Breda June 9, 2013 at 9:49 AM Great descriptive on our powerful oceans. Very well done on the translation rhyme format. Mario De Paz June 9, 2013 at 11:20 AM Thank you for coming and appreciation. This is a poem composed many years ago

Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2013 at 5:13 AM captured well Mario like the imagery here Shadow x Mario De Paz June 9, 2013 at 11:20 AM Thank you, Shadow