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*Summer is almost here.  The bear have returned.

Stroll

movement caught my eye
         from just outside the window
             a black bear strolled by


Heidi Sands

5/26/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Great Haiku, Heidi. Elaine
Sands Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Thank you Elaine. It was a sight to see :)
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May 28, 2018 at 4:27 AM
Super awesome poem! Such cool imagery. -JWE
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May 28, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Thank you JWE :)
Gentile Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Wow, no bears in the city, Heidi xxoo Happy Sunday
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Thank you Mike. Happy Sunday to you too :)
Warrior Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:36 AM
The 'bear' necessities of summer...great haiku Heidi...love and light...^WW^
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Thank you WW :)
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May 27, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Nice!
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May 27, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Thank you Mike :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Wow, what an amazing sight that must have been for you Heidi, but then you're probably used to it. Lovely hakiu. Tom.
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Hi Tom. Yes, it is always an amazing sight. They come through every summer. This one and one other one a while back with her cub were the closest. Thank you :)
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May 27, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Oh, how I envy you, just a tad, for I do get surprise visitors to my garden, the latest a grey heron. Always with a camera to hand I snapped it. Your haiku a virtual pleasure! Mick
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:54 AM
That is nice you have camera in hand to take your photos. I am sure you have some nice photographs. Thank you for your comment :)
May Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Beautiful haiku Heidi
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:53 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Michael Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 6:32 PM
What a sight to behold, especially if you had intentions of going for a walk...All the best Heidi
Sands Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Yes Arturo. Thank you :)
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May 26, 2018 at 5:21 PM
That is so cool! Wonderful lines :) xomo!
Sands Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Thank you Maureen :)
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 5:04 PM
I'd be frightened to be honest - am glad we don't have bears here!:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 5:51 PM
They are to be respected and for people to be cautious. However, they do not like noises, and retreat fast. Thank you for your visit and comment Jan :)
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