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Striving Vine


ivy twirls 

     grateful

          clings to trees 

               as God* nurtures

                    in reaching 

                         top spot


1Chronicles 29:13 Now therefore, our God, we thank thee, and praise thy glorious name.

March 20, 2021

1st place, "Let's Get Creative With Haiku" Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 3/22/2021.
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La France Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance
Ligon Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Great imagery! Congratulations!
Merryman Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Beata, congrats on your win with this lovely haiku! Blessings, Kim M
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Excellent haiku Beata, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ashley Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Dear Beata, your pen captures the ivies quest to reach the top with poetic finesse. Congratulations on your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Way to go, Beata/ Congratulations.
Neumann Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations on your top spot in this contest. Kind wishes, Kai
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:29 PM
- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, ... a top spot, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Hi Beata, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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