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Striving Toward Distinction

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Stopped an angel on the hill a wildflower growing amid impossible through cracks in the palm reflecting some deep feelings motivating you to follow across the water, driven by tides she is in the crescent phase In a nutshell, the essence similar to a shy, secretive fan. Optimism is stronger than evidence creativity is stronger than erudition fiction is more common than truth the power of fantasy trumps realism only laughter can heal sorrow and love conquers death.
Written: January 29, 2023

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Date: 2/1/2023 4:07:00 PM
Enchanting Lasaad. I especially appreciate your comparison of her essence in crescent phase to a shy, secretive fan :)
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Date: 1/29/2023 6:44:00 PM
"only laughter can heal sorrow and love conquers death." The second stanza is crystallized wisdom. Gems of thought from a gifted seer and poet.
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Date: 1/29/2023 3:14:00 PM
Words striving distinction--your second stanza has nuggets of wisdom thoughts, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/29/2023 11:33:00 AM
Very interesting and provoking writing, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
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