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Do we not procure enough happiness in our dull lives? When someone else is amply satisfied with themselves, Otherwise, how much joy does one merely receive? When someone else gains trust and in you can believe. We should all endeavor to esteem and regard every one of us. A more peculiar companion or family isn't genuine, thus. May our excursion be one of happiness and daintiness? What's withal in all we serve and heed, with spiritedness, To set up an external assessment for everyone clod. It is out of the compass of any individual who isn't God. Regardless, there is pain and gain in the present situation. Otherwise, there is a service of both joy and tribulation. His power, weakness, and feelings were frittered away. It's paradoxical since he was destroying his own joy.
Written: December 21, 2021

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Date: 12/23/2021 4:33:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, sending you seasonal greetings filled with love and serenity. Kindest regards...Love & Hugs Delice
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Date: 12/22/2021 9:36:00 PM
When we see others happy, that adds to our own happiness . As fellow beings we have the moral responsibility to help those in need and ensure their well being ! When we are entwined with one another, world becomes a better place ! Beautiful message Lassad... ! You are a compassionate soul
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Date: 12/22/2021 8:34:00 PM
Powerful message Lasaad, All the best for the festive season and new year. Harry
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Date: 12/22/2021 1:49:00 PM
Profound and provoking thinking, my friend, Lasaad. Excellent writing. Blessings and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/22/2021 7:55:00 AM
Much depth and eloquence to your thoughts, Lasaad. I am impressed by the upbeat message and splendid vocabulary my friend. This is one of your best poems.
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Date: 12/22/2021 2:23:00 AM
I wonder how much true happiness do we have in our lives? It is sad to see a person fritter away their life but it is their life so it is not our decision as to how it should be used. I have heard a few people say of themselves all those wasted years. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for your visit to my page. Our son-in-law was diagnosed with gallstones and was kept in the hospital overnight. Sara
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Date: 12/22/2021 1:54:00 AM
Occasionally people put on a smiling face when in fact they are sad. Your attitude is wonderful. Always be kind. May God bless you.
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