Strive For Perfection

your love is eyez
 blood shot red
i stood up waiting for
 your answer 
tears flood the bottom 
from rolling from 
the top of the bed
not giving up 
but becoming 
not living without 
but giving 
taking any chances 
to seige comfort
and it's my risk
that becomes a twist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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