Strip-Show

Ah my dear girl, how you show hidden treasure
In awesome and innocent ways
Small actions spark cold, thrilling pleasure
I pant at your power displays

Legs crossed to perfection, so cruelly they mock!
Lithe hands tug the cuff of blue jeans
Toes pointed slightly, you peel off your sock
Revealing your bare naked dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Wow
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October 8, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Congrats Tim on "Strip-Show" being featured. Vince
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October 3, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 12:24 AM
haha great rhyme!
Richards Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 7:17 AM
What a tease!!! :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 6:02 AM
Very passionate in a few lines. Keep writing. Sara
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