Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Stripping Layers of My Soul

from the mountain's edge
tangerine tipped trees
aglow with the rise
of crimson skies
shine golden

i stand beneath
the dance of leaves
in the hues
of october's breeze
shivering
in its foggy breath
watching
as the trees
undress

stripping
layers of my soul
i fall
emotionless
bare
as death
piles
around me
in bloodless drops

i stand
in the pools
of its claret
bleeding myself dry
as i snap
like branches
through the weight
of life

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L. J. Carber May 25, 2020 at 10:49 AM This is very, very good-- great imagery!Congrats on your win in Brian's C contest [sorry I didn't respond sooner}

Neethu Sivaraj Adiyoli May 15, 2020 at 1:02 AM It so complex and deep. Congratulations on your well deserved win :)

Frank Sheehan October 13, 2019 at 1:41 PM Your work is brilliant. Enjoying it immensely. Great pen. Sandra Adams October 13, 2019 at 2:49 PM Thank you so much Frank for both your visit and wonderful comment on my page :) hugs

Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:10 AM The sadness in this falls like leaves seeking the earth to finally rest. Somber feelings drift through your words my friend. Sandra Adams October 9, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you my friend...my muse was all over the place this weekend... hugs :)

Regina Mcintosh October 7, 2019 at 8:41 PM I love this so... It's a fave. I love the way you have with words... so delightful always... God bless you with many words, Gina Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 8:52 PM Thank you Gina, i am honored and humbled by your words...God has blessed all of us artists, you included with various styles of poetry... hugs and blessings my friend :)

Gordon Mcconnell October 7, 2019 at 3:17 PM Lovely penning Sandy, really impressive write with real insightful thought! Poetry hugs,Gordon Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 7:14 PM Thank you so much Gordon.... hugs :)

Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 2:00 PM Love it, Sandra. Beautiful imagery. Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 7:14 PM Thank you Line, my muse was all over the place today...

Vijay Pandit October 7, 2019 at 12:19 PM Power of your words...tangerine tipped trees..dance of leaves..as i snap like branches..always a reason to pause and think--and grab its being--sad or not. Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 1:59 PM Thank you so much Vijay, my muse likes these emotional writes best :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2019 at 12:18 PM - A vulnerability, Sandra ... associated with autumn as a background it makes sense to me ... - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 1:58 PM Thank you so much Anne-Lise :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger October 7, 2019 at 12:02 PM This is so beautiful in imagery " stripping layers of my soul i fall emotionless bare as death piles around me in bloodless drops" WOW! Sandra. WOW! Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 12:07 PM Thank you Caren, the first two stanzas were penned last week as i was trying to pen a poem for your contest, but when i came back to the poem today my muse ran off, in a rant and it ended well over 45 words...so thank you for the inspirational thoughts that started this piece :) hugs

Hello There October 7, 2019 at 11:38 AM Beautifully vivid, my friend. Deeply sorrowful. hugs ~ Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 11:58 AM Thank you my friend....i dislike the fall, it always leads to winter's cold and colorless drab ...which reminds me of death, my muse always goes more somber in its air :) hugs

Ralph Sergi October 7, 2019 at 11:29 AM Hi Sandra: your use of syllables creat a beautiful rhythm! Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 11:57 AM Thank you so much Ralph for your wonderful comment :)