Notes About The Poem

Strings

Giving without stings
	is the empathic thing

Giving with strings
	is the narcissist who stings

Beware the skin of softness
	Keep an eye on the sword

Enticement has its dangers
	Paradise lurks forewarned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Your last two lines are the crowning glory of your wondrous poem Arthur. Every couplet is a gem. Enjoyed!
Daniel Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Thought provoking, Arthur:)
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Some good warnings..Enjoyed reading this today..Sara
Salehi Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 9:24 AM
and I pondering how magnificent this is...
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 12:05 PM
brief but profound, Arthur!! Just how I like them.
Manassian Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 1:42 AM
Much to consider here, my dear. Hugs
Parveen Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Very good write Arthur:)
White Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Great couplets my dear friend, so well written.
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 11:43 PM
Arthur so much truth spoken here. This is also a great truth. Applause my friend...
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Well written warning my dear friend... give from the heart always accepted <3 Hugs Eve ~`*
Smith Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:15 AM
I agree...keep an eye on those only using others to get a step up
Gupta Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Superb write ... every line a memorable quote ...
Sivey Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 4:37 AM
"Enticement has its dangers/Paradise lurks forewarned," what an excellent couple lines there my friend! You have written such a stunning piece, one full of twists and a grand message! I surely loved reading your masterful poem this morning! You have delighted me with your creativity! Great Work!!
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