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Giving without stings is the empathic thing Giving with strings is the narcissist who stings Beware the skin of softness Keep an eye on the sword Enticement has its dangers Paradise lurks forewarned

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2017 8:04:00 PM

Your last two lines are the crowning glory of your wondrous poem Arthur. Every couplet is a gem. Enjoyed!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/15/2017 10:15:00 AM

Thought provoking, Arthur:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2017 4:00:00 PM

Some good warnings..Enjoyed reading this today..Sara

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/14/2017 9:24:00 AM

and I pondering how magnificent this is...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2017 12:05:00 PM

brief but profound, Arthur!! Just how I like them.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/13/2017 1:42:00 AM

Much to consider here, my dear. Hugs

Tahira Parveen

Date: 10/11/2017 1:17:00 PM

Very good write Arthur:)

Darren White

Date: 10/10/2017 8:30:00 AM

Great couplets my dear friend, so well written.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/9/2017 11:43:00 PM

Arthur so much truth spoken here. This is also a great truth. Applause my friend...

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2017 12:03:00 PM

Well written warning my dear friend... give from the heart always accepted <3 Hugs Eve ~`*

Tim Smith

Date: 10/9/2017 8:15:00 AM

I agree...keep an eye on those only using others to get a step up

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/9/2017 7:12:00 AM

Superb write ... every line a memorable quote ...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2017 4:37:00 AM

"Enticement has its dangers/Paradise lurks forewarned," what an excellent couple lines there my friend! You have written such a stunning piece, one full of twists and a grand message! I surely loved reading your masterful poem this morning! You have delighted me with your creativity! Great Work!!