String of Star

STRING OF STAR

Getting you as a dream come true
Is the biggest star in my life
I may have four aces
But the star is strange you cannot total love
Even, having a star studded picture
Without you, my star, my sweetheart nothing in my future
Having you is a special feature
The countless strings… you are my life, my love, my future
These strings of stars are pure
You are a star guiding me
You are not only within my grasp, but you are inside me
Before we know it we are one
One singularly one 
Forever more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/26/2011 6:46:00 AM
Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for checking out my contest in the list of contest..It is called "Low Country Boil"..You can look up the form on this site at the bottom of the page on the left under "Forms Of Poetry"..Just type in "Low Country Boil Recipes" or "Low Country Boil History" in your search engine and find some information about low country boil..Sara
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Date: 7/21/2011 5:06:00 AM
Nice dedication. Dalila. I published three books years back. All were self published just for friends and relatives. But all the poems of the books are published on PS. You may go to my archive look for poems posted from 2005 to 2009.Whatever I have written after that, I may publish in future. Thanks for your interest
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