String Bikini Or Shorts--It Depends

"All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini." - Jack Freestone



Jack’s declaration’s surely right
for young guys who most love the sight
of babes whose string bikinis show
much flesh up top and down below.

A buff young guy walked down the aisle
with one whose beach bod made him smile.
At home he knew precisely why
she wore . . . not much--to catch his eye!

            ***************

BOTH bodies changed as decades passed.
Love of bikinis didn’t last!
He likes her fine in shorts and tees
or muu-muus. He’s not hard to please.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Love this, Janice! Congratulations on your placement!
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
Rose  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:23 PM
lol when we spend that many years together in the end, we love in any suit , nice one congrats
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Thanks so much, Mystic. Janice
Ward Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Nicely penned. Well done!
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Thanks so much, Julia. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Ahh!! Sweet outcome for the woman who is now part her prime to know that the men in their lives still like them just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 1:43 PM
A creative/fun write. I enjoyed reading it. My dad had a lot to say about how I was dressed. "Good Luck" Have a great day.............
Canerdy Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Thanks so much, Paula! Janice
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