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Striking Penetration

Heart break ! Depression! Family loss! Its that unworldly Striking Penetration! That pulls you beneath Those fluffy clouds your floating on (Or as u can say used too) It's strikes out the morals You truly believed your whole life! Which quivers through your body Into your own unique consciousness! Over thinking thoughts of grief into cherishing it! more as just a weakness! Showering that special layer of skin With grueling long cuts and slashes upon the body prolonging the pain and the remembrance of ones past it truly is ones breaking of the heart entirely The striking penetration of Persuasion of a mere heart!

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Date: 1/21/2016 10:33:00 PM
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