Striking Penetration
Heart break !
Depression!
Family loss!
Its that unworldly
Striking Penetration!
That pulls you beneath
Those fluffy clouds your floating on
(Or as u can say used too)
It's strikes out
the morals
You truly believed
your whole life!
Which quivers through your body
Into your own unique
consciousness!
Over thinking thoughts
of grief into cherishing it!
more as just a weakness!
Showering that special layer of skin
With grueling long cuts and slashes
upon the body
prolonging the pain
and the remembrance
of ones past
it truly is ones
breaking of the heart entirely
The striking penetration of
Persuasion of a mere heart!
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