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highlighting the truth how the rest of the world sees it 

Through my injustices it has given me an insight one I never had before These are the words written down as the pen is mightier and exposes a soul by Gutle Schnapper Rothschild if my sons did not want wars there would be none These elitists are parts of a spine forming on the snakes back they are slimy toads without emotions or feelings They are wizards part of a circle who claim rights to the skull and crossbones of Adam dark magic your seed is from hell From the ashes of fire you will smother tortured empty spirits forgotten void your soul is empty of loving peace

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Date: 1/9/2017 2:31:00 AM
Thunderous truths my good friend, Liam, eloquently expressed. Seven!
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Date: 1/8/2017 6:26:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.The Bible is very clear about all these n' more in the future.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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