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Street Sign

its tin metal somewhat mangled from a moving van that fetched impairment twisted signage of thin charm tinged with seasonal blues battered by brash snow, ice pellets, sombre rain below a street lamp that nightly courts white moths in fluttered fury lofty sign, a perch for sparrows shaking off dust above the humming hiss of a street that throbs in summer heat above the unfurling laughter of children skipping rope above the tangled banter of neighbors who amble home, pulled by comfort's zone script of certainty, location defined by a battered street sign, it's endless gaze that knows the rhythm and pitch of life laboring below Written July 25, 2021

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Date: 3/30/2022 12:34:00 AM
Congratulations, again!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/30/2022 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj. I appreciate your note. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 8/5/2021 10:48:00 AM
So creative Brian - a view of life from a sign at the crossroads of life's experiences - a simple, everyday thing (we ignore unless looking for direction) that inspires. Wonderfully done. High fives and kudos for your win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/5/2021 12:05:00 PM
My appreciation for your encouraging comments, Sam. The poem garnered unexpected recognition after NA's from earlier submissions. All the best, Brian
Date: 8/2/2021 5:57:00 PM
Wonderfully done. God bless you and congrats on your win. Love, Gina
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/3/2021 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Gina. Terrific suggestion for a poem - an object we pass by daily that invites poetic recognition. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 8/2/2021 5:58:00 AM
pulled by comfort's zone Very beautiful writing. Congratulations on your win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/2/2021 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. You are very thoughtful to leave so many supportive comments. Best wishes, Brian

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