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Street Life

A box made of cardboard with nothing inside Came from a shop where white-goods are supplied The high street still busy but less than before When I used to manage the furniture store The shoppers are rushing to spend lots of cash They're choosing gifts hoping their choices aren’t rash The street lamps are lighting as dusk rears its head And queues in the take-outs await to be fed Folk rushing now to be home with their kin Where cosy and warm they will lock themselves in The pub opens up for its late clientele I’d go there each evening and lunchtime as well Crowds thinning out as the cold starts to bite And my box made of cardboard is home for the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/21/2021 9:46:00 AM
What a sad but true story/write. No one should live on the streets but many do. Have a Blessed Christmas................
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/21/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. Have yourself a smashing Christmas. Terry
Date: 12/2/2021 6:44:00 PM
Willie Nelson's 'Pretty Paper, Pretty Pencils for you...Ribbons of Blue' comes to mind. ~ gw
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/3/2021 11:00:00 AM
Don’t think I know the song but as Willie Nelson is pretty much a household name, I’ll take that as a compliment ;-) Thanks Gershon. Terry
Date: 12/2/2021 6:23:00 PM
Such a heartfelt verse, Terry, a different type of a poem I am use to reading. Very good my friend. Enjoyed reading.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/3/2021 11:01:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Eve. Thankyou. Terry
Date: 12/2/2021 1:45:00 PM
Terry, I felt sad when I read this one, but, on the other hand I thought how well it is written...sort of ebbs and flows along like ambling down a street. Incredibly fine writing.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thanks, Milt. I’m glad you ‘enjoyed’ this. I didn’t want to just introduce the box at the end (like in a whodunnit, when whodunnit was a character you don’t recall seeing earlier) but I also didn’t want to give the game away. I hope I achieved that aim. Terry
Date: 12/2/2021 1:07:00 PM
a sad state of affairs, indeed, terry. your poem works so well, because even though you mentioned the cardboard box in the first line, i was still surprised by the ending. great poem!
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2021 2:08:00 PM
Hi, Ilene, as I said to Milt, above. Mentioning the box in the beginning was deliberate, but I tried various writes to ensure that it wouldn’t be a ‘what’s the box for?’ Consideration throughout. Hopefully I got it right. Thanks for your visit. Terry
Date: 12/2/2021 10:34:00 AM
I always remember seeing homeless people fighting over a wet cardboard box under the bridge at Pont Neuf in Paris; in the end, they all had a piece no one wanted . . . . .
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/3/2021 9:59:00 AM
"Cold and wet" is how I remember Wales . . . . .
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2021 10:59:00 AM
Cold is one thing, Rico, but cold AND wet? They’re welcome to that. Cheers. Terry
Date: 12/2/2021 3:01:00 AM
We have to count our blessings sometimes Terry, surprised me all the homeless on the streets of Chester. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2021 5:56:00 AM
We have a workman outside at the moment (2pm) and it’s taters out. Wouldn't wanna be kipping in a doorway tonight. Cheers, Tom. Terry

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