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Streaming Dreams

My mind is like a rapid stream..
Flowing images from all my dreams..
As they crash on the rocks and break apart..
They split into daydreams and pictures
from my heart..



by Michael J Falotico
06/04/2011
"Write me a Rippling Stream"

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/9/2011 9:47:00 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Michael. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/8/2011 1:40:00 AM michael, a fine write! best cheeers and congrats..:) hugggs Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/6/2011 9:59:00 AM Cngratulations on this win in the contest of Constance, Michael Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/6/2011 6:59:00 AM Wonderful write Michael..Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 6/6/2011 6:53:00 AM Wow Michael. This is lovely. many congrats. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/5/2011 10:26:00 PM congratulations Michael, with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~ Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/5/2011 9:59:00 PM what a way to go, michael.. winning cheers to you! :) huggs! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/5/2011 8:47:00 PM Congrats Michael on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid write my W.K. enjoy with luv as your Jersey Girl enjoys all your words ..luv.. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 6/5/2011 9:11:00 AM Good writing here, Mike. Login to Reply

Emma Mantle Date: 6/4/2011 10:07:00 AM This is simply beautiful! Such a nice take on a 'rippling stream'. Best wishes Michael in the contest, this reads like a winner. Have a great weekend Em :) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/4/2011 9:25:00 AM You seem to be in a dreamy mood Mr. F! I am quite positive this one will make it to the winner's list ;) hope your week's been a great one.. Love Wilma Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/4/2011 9:02:00 AM enjoyed this very creative piece of fine poetry. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 6/4/2011 8:15:00 AM Michael-check spelling on the title at bottom of poem...u omitted the N. My latest favorite...holy smokies, Batman. Splaaat! POW!!! sMAAAAAASH-ING. U R GOING TO THE TOP WITH THIS ONE...I WILL BET CHOCOLATE BARS ON IT! Gwendolen Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/4/2011 8:25:00 AM I fixed that, thank you darling... I always type like its a race lol....Glad you like the Poem... luv Michael

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/4/2011 8:10:00 AM love how this ended, michael... pure delight! best wishes.:) huggs, nette Login to Reply