Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Streaming Dreams

My mind is like a rapid stream..
Flowing images from all my dreams..
As they crash on the rocks and break apart..
They split into daydreams and pictures
from my heart..



by Michael J Falotico
06/04/2011
"Write me a Rippling Stream"

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud June 8, 2011 at 1:40 AM michael, a fine write! best cheeers and congrats..:) hugggs

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 9:59 AM Cngratulations on this win in the contest of Constance, Michael

Kash Poet June 6, 2011 at 6:59 AM Wonderful write Michael..Congrats on your win.

Tahera Mannan June 6, 2011 at 6:53 AM Wow Michael. This is lovely. many congrats.

Constance La France June 5, 2011 at 10:26 PM congratulations Michael, with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~

Nette Onclaud June 5, 2011 at 9:59 PM what a way to go, michael.. winning cheers to you! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 8:47 PM Congrats Michael on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid write my W.K. enjoy with luv as your Jersey Girl enjoys all your words ..luv..

Dinda Minardi June 5, 2011 at 9:11 AM Good writing here, Mike.

Emma Mantle June 4, 2011 at 10:07 AM This is simply beautiful! Such a nice take on a 'rippling stream'. Best wishes Michael in the contest, this reads like a winner. Have a great weekend Em :)

Wilma Neels June 4, 2011 at 9:25 AM You seem to be in a dreamy mood Mr. F! I am quite positive this one will make it to the winner's list ;) hope your week's been a great one.. Love Wilma

James Foulk June 4, 2011 at 9:02 AM enjoyed this very creative piece of fine poetry.

Gwendolen Song June 4, 2011 at 8:15 AM Michael-check spelling on the title at bottom of poem...u omitted the N. My latest favorite...holy smokies, Batman. Splaaat! POW!!! sMAAAAAASH-ING. U R GOING TO THE TOP WITH THIS ONE...I WILL BET CHOCOLATE BARS ON IT! Gwendolen Michael J. Falotico June 4, 2011 at 8:25 AM I fixed that, thank you darling... I always type like its a race lol....Glad you like the Poem... luv Michael

Nette Onclaud June 4, 2011 at 8:10 AM love how this ended, michael... pure delight! best wishes.:) huggs, nette