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Streaming Dreams

My mind is like a rapid stream.. Flowing images from all my dreams.. As they crash on the rocks and break apart.. They split into daydreams and pictures from my heart.. by Michael J Falotico 06/04/2011 "Write me a Rippling Stream"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2011 1:40:00 AM

michael, a fine write! best cheeers and congrats..:) hugggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 9:59:00 AM

Cngratulations on this win in the contest of Constance, Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 6/6/2011 6:59:00 AM

Wonderful write Michael..Congrats on your win.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 6/6/2011 6:53:00 AM

Wow Michael. This is lovely. many congrats.

Constance La France

Date: 6/5/2011 10:26:00 PM

congratulations Michael, with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2011 9:59:00 PM

what a way to go, michael.. winning cheers to you! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 8:47:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid write my W.K. enjoy with luv as your Jersey Girl enjoys all your words ..luv..

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/5/2011 9:11:00 AM

Good writing here, Mike.

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/4/2011 10:07:00 AM

This is simply beautiful! Such a nice take on a 'rippling stream'. Best wishes Michael in the contest, this reads like a winner. Have a great weekend Em :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/4/2011 9:25:00 AM

You seem to be in a dreamy mood Mr. F! I am quite positive this one will make it to the winner's list ;) hope your week's been a great one.. Love Wilma

James Foulk

Date: 6/4/2011 9:02:00 AM

enjoyed this very creative piece of fine poetry.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/4/2011 8:15:00 AM

Michael-check spelling on the title at bottom of poem...u omitted the N. My latest favorite...holy smokies, Batman. Splaaat! POW!!! sMAAAAAASH-ING. U R GOING TO THE TOP WITH THIS ONE...I WILL BET CHOCOLATE BARS ON IT! Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 6/4/2011 8:25:00 AM

I fixed that, thank you darling... I always type like its a race lol....Glad you like the Poem... luv Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2011 8:10:00 AM

love how this ended, michael... pure delight! best wishes.:) huggs, nette