Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Stream So Serene

Summertime scene
  willow-tree waters
Blissful balm
  clearwater calm

Turquoise translucent
  stream so serene
Tiny ships set sail
  'neath a magical moon



            August 23, 2020
 Strand Completely New (#26) Contest
         Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2020 at 2:55 PM this is very lovely. Congrats on a well deserved win. Gershon Wolf August 26, 2020 at 7:20 AM Thank you so much, Andrea, and I believe that congratulations are in order for you too in the same contest! Happy Wednesday! Wine and Wins, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 10:46 AM Congratulations on your win. Hot summer, cool water and a magical moon. A wonderful day and write. Enjoy your win and day................ Gershon Wolf August 24, 2020 at 7:52 PM Thank you for noticing, Paula. Here's to Magic and Enchantment, Gershon

Line Gauthier August 24, 2020 at 4:17 AM Lovely imagery, Gershon. Congrats on your top win ~ Gershon Wolf August 24, 2020 at 7:49 PM Thanks for noticing, Line. Here's to Imaginative Imagery, Gershon

Judy Ball August 23, 2020 at 1:54 PM Beautiful Gershon. The imagery here is lovely for me. I can see the willow trees lining a lovely stream. Love this. God Bless, JB Gershon Wolf August 24, 2020 at 7:45 PM Willows weep for me -- sure... And I can walk on water too... ~ Icarus

Michelle Faulkner August 23, 2020 at 12:38 PM Willow tree waters - so tranquil... Gershon Wolf August 24, 2020 at 7:44 PM Thanks for the sweet comment, Michelle. Dancing waters, Gershon