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Stream of Motion

Oh, Scooter S-6, how you ride!
   So slick and smooth, you slither, slide.
One foot on top, the second spurs
   your sporty spin that stirs and whirs.

Oh, Scooter S-6, how you glide!
   You stream along- fast speed supplied,
as one strong leg steers you to streak
   down sidewalk paths so slick and sleek.

Oh, Scooter S-6, side by side,
   we sway and swiftly scoot in stride,
a stream of motion in full swing!
   As we swish by,  sweet songs I sing!


February 6, 2018

Contest: Poetry In Motion
Sponsor: Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/6/2018 11:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/12/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/6/2018 5:59:00 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/6/2018 4:01:00 PM
Such lovely alliteration and rhyme, many congratulations on your win sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! It was such a fun write for me! I appreciate your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/6/2018 3:27:00 PM
Back with congratulations dear poetess! xomo :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/6/2018 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra, a joy to read. :))
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, Roy, for your visit and supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Date: 3/6/2018 12:29:00 PM
I nominate AP, Inc. to produce your ad. AP stands for "Adorable Productions." Such a precious poem and illustration, Sandra. Well-deserved winner! :) gw
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:24:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Gershon! I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. I had such a good time working on it! I was fortunate to find the cute illustration too. Thanks for your visit and support. Sandra :)
Date: 3/6/2018 9:41:00 AM
Oh what a cute photo! Love the alliteration and rhyme! Sounds like a great ride! Congratulations, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thanks for the great contest, Kim. I enjoyed writing for it and very much appreciate my nice placement and your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/6/2018 9:31:00 AM
I can hear it! Awesome :). Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
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