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Oh, Scooter S-6, how you ride! So slick and smooth, you slither, slide. One foot on top, the second spurs your sporty spin that stirs and whirs. Oh, Scooter S-6, how you glide! You stream along- fast speed supplied, as one strong leg steers you to streak down sidewalk paths so slick and sleek. Oh, Scooter S-6, side by side, we sway and swiftly scoot in stride, a stream of motion in full swing! As we swish by, sweet songs I sing! February 6, 2018 Contest: Poetry In Motion Sponsor: Matt Caliri

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2018 11:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/12/2018 1:43:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2018 5:59:00 PM

Well done, Sandra. Congrats on your win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:26:00 PM

Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2018 4:01:00 PM

Such lovely alliteration and rhyme, many congratulations on your win sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! It was such a fun write for me! I appreciate your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/6/2018 3:27:00 PM

Back with congratulations dear poetess! xomo :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra

Roy Pett

Date: 3/6/2018 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra, a joy to read. :))

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Roy, for your visit and supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated! Sandra :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2018 12:29:00 PM

I nominate AP, Inc. to produce your ad. AP stands for "Adorable Productions." Such a precious poem and illustration, Sandra. Well-deserved winner! :) gw

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:24:00 PM

Oh, thank you, Gershon! I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. I had such a good time working on it! I was fortunate to find the cute illustration too. Thanks for your visit and support. Sandra :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2018 9:41:00 AM

Oh what a cute photo! Love the alliteration and rhyme! Sounds like a great ride! Congratulations, Sandra!

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:22:00 PM

Thanks for the great contest, Kim. I enjoyed writing for it and very much appreciate my nice placement and your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/6/2018 9:31:00 AM

I can hear it! Awesome :). Good luck in the contest! xomo

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 7:22:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra