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Stream of Life- Nothing More Luxurious

Life is full of several good items, a mother is their bag
offspring, an addition to her toil but never considered a lag.
She is invaluable, even if wearing rag
family, career, society; yet suffers no drag.
Fertility is blessed for nature and humanity to brag
strong arms to protect, absolute care, the tag.
Breasts to nourish, the little life sings, not nag
love so wide, allowing everyone to wag.
Pure and simple is this heart that its muscles never sag
gives more and more, despite causing more than one gag.

Her tears give her strength much credence
her pain, devastating to pull down any fence
and gives stiff protection, which sometimes make no sense.
The cat easily licks the kitten at no expense,
curb, carried by the jaw of the lioness in full conscience.
Sweet responsibility not for sale, not even in pence,
colours existence beautifully and gives it true essence.
Oh these nurturing hands, beat the assessment of science.
For the bonding with her young, osmium is less dense,
true motherhood to every being is enough opulence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/6/2021 10:43:00 AM
Hi Funom, You have penned such a well written and heartfelt poem. I echo what Sara said; a mother does that and so much more. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/26/2021 5:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis... I appreciate this.
Date: 4/5/2021 1:48:00 PM
I think Sara’s comment is very apt or this tremendous piece.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/5/2021 3:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard.
Date: 4/5/2021 4:39:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. "The hand that rocks the cradle rules the world." A mother's focus is her children, she does what she can do for them to help them become the best they can be. Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/5/2021 3:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara
Date: 4/4/2021 2:47:00 PM
This was not easy to pen with marvelous end rhymes. You did great!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/5/2021 3:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Caren
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