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'stream of Liberty'

water tumbling down
saturating deep within
to my nucleus
purging insecurities
like a stream of liberty


Contest Name: Write Me A Rippling Stream
Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~
By: Wilma N. Neels
Date: 03/06/2011






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5th Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/9/2011 9:44:00 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/8/2011 1:36:00 AM with just a few lines, you make a big difference, wilms! my happy congrats on your real swell winning spot!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Susan Mills Date: 6/7/2011 1:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/6/2011 6:51:00 AM Congrats Wilma on your win..very insightful write here. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 6/6/2011 6:50:00 AM So much meaning in so few words. Lovely. Many congrats Wilma. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/5/2011 10:20:00 PM Congratulations Wilma, with your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~ Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/5/2011 9:55:00 PM oh, how original, wilms... congrats big time..:) huggs Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/5/2011 8:41:00 PM Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this splendid write my friend.. enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/4/2011 10:45:00 PM a very interesting title and line in the poem, Wilma. A stream of liberty. I always enjoy seeing your new daily poem!! Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/4/2011 2:42:00 PM oh how I wish it was that easy, nice strong write! Thanks for all your nice comments! Light & Love Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 6/4/2011 1:46:00 PM Enjoyed this piece Wilma.! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/4/2011 12:35:00 PM Dear Wilma, I love the way the water purifies your spirit. You really capture a special feeling here. It's nice to be back reading poetry again. (But I still wish I were fishing. LOL) Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/4/2011 7:27:00 AM Your talent is unparrelled in this write... I amazing take on the picture and the contest.. A winner from your amazing mind...with Love Michael Login to Reply

Emma Mantle Date: 6/3/2011 8:39:00 AM Best wishes for the contest Wilma. This is a great entry. Have a great weekend Em :) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/3/2011 7:29:00 AM wow this one is deep! love how you say so much in just 5 lines, Wilma :) wonderful write and metaphor here :) mwahugs to you :) Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 6/3/2011 6:29:00 AM I love this ripple willma,always c.c Login to Reply