Wilma Neels Poet Tanka

'stream of Liberty'

water tumbling down
saturating deep within
to my nucleus
purging insecurities
like a stream of liberty


Contest Name: Write Me A Rippling Stream
Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~
By: Wilma N. Neels
Date: 03/06/2011






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5th Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 9:44 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud June 8, 2011 at 1:36 AM with just a few lines, you make a big difference, wilms! my happy congrats on your real swell winning spot!..:) huggs

Susan Mills June 7, 2011 at 1:08 PM Congratulations on your win!

Kash Poet June 6, 2011 at 6:51 AM Congrats Wilma on your win..very insightful write here.

Tahera Mannan June 6, 2011 at 6:50 AM So much meaning in so few words. Lovely. Many congrats Wilma.

Constance La France June 5, 2011 at 10:20 PM Congratulations Wilma, with your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~

Nette Onclaud June 5, 2011 at 9:55 PM oh, how original, wilms... congrats big time..:) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 8:41 PM Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this splendid write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2011 at 10:45 PM a very interesting title and line in the poem, Wilma. A stream of liberty. I always enjoy seeing your new daily poem!! Luv, andrea

Debbie Guzzi June 4, 2011 at 2:42 PM oh how I wish it was that easy, nice strong write! Thanks for all your nice comments! Light & Love

Joe Maverick June 4, 2011 at 1:46 PM Enjoyed this piece Wilma.!

Carolyn Devonshire June 4, 2011 at 12:35 PM Dear Wilma, I love the way the water purifies your spirit. You really capture a special feeling here. It's nice to be back reading poetry again. (But I still wish I were fishing. LOL) Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico June 4, 2011 at 7:27 AM Your talent is unparrelled in this write... I amazing take on the picture and the contest.. A winner from your amazing mind...with Love Michael

Emma Mantle June 3, 2011 at 8:39 AM Best wishes for the contest Wilma. This is a great entry. Have a great weekend Em :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 3, 2011 at 7:29 AM wow this one is deep! love how you say so much in just 5 lines, Wilma :) wonderful write and metaphor here :) mwahugs to you :)

C.C Bloomsfield June 3, 2011 at 6:29 AM I love this ripple willma,always c.c