Stream Cannot Change Course

long, thin, slenderness

pathway leading to remorse

stream cannot change course.

 

(January 24, 2011  Wausau, Wisconsin)

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved
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Geiser Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Very nice.
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January 26, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Very nice.
Marcum Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:37 PM
smile -- what a very gloom brushed perspective my dear for, where would a life be cast within such hopelessness -- thankfully there is a Light greater than ourselves to guide and lead the way back unto that symbolics yellow brick road -- very soulful verse and i wish your beauty all the best -- keep painting my dear and, i am certain in time that the colours shall gain a brighter hue -- love, christopher
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January 24, 2011 at 7:31 PM
a change in path which cannot be taken because the path is already laid out, enjoyed your write Christine,..p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Good one..Very creative work..Enjoyed..Sara
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