Valsa George Poet Haiku

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May - 7- 2026

1470 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Brian Strand

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stream

lovely dancing stream
snaking it's way down the slopes~
with soft jingling sounds.

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     /         \                     (    ) 
   /             \                /        \
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/                    \        /                 \
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its way down the slopes~
with soft jingling sounds.

“*”     “*”      @      “*”         “*”
   @        @   i    @      @           @            @
=\!/=       =\!/=       =\!/=      =\!/=       =\!/=

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Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2026 at 5:15 PM I am curious. Did you win with this gem? Valsa George May 22, 2026 at 9:06 PM No Andrea.... Here, I too had expected a win. Had done quite a bit of work.

sara Etgen-Baker May 11, 2026 at 4:46 PM outstanding!

Victor Buhagiar May 11, 2026 at 9:10 AM Dear Valsa, your haiku is magnificent. Well done. Best for a win.

Ink Empress May 10, 2026 at 8:34 AM Wow this is beautiful and so artistic! fave for me! Hope this poem go Placed sweet valsa Sending you light always

Joseph P. DiMino May 8, 2026 at 5:25 AM Yes, streams are meditation in gentle force. Very tranquil for me also.

Paige Hind May 7, 2026 at 7:00 PM lovely <3

Bj Legros Kelley May 7, 2026 at 4:15 PM Your poem is refreshingly fun and so very creative Valsa!

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2026 at 9:33 AM This is so creative, Valsa. Adorable

Sara Kendrick May 7, 2026 at 6:25 AM Creative work, Valsa. It dances upon the page. Thank you for sharing it with us. If for a contest, the way it reads, and its dancing picture should be a good contender. Way to go. Sara K

Yann Rolland May 7, 2026 at 4:44 AM such a creativity, waw, really enjoyed wishes