Black Eyed Susan Poet Shape

Straycation

Straycation

                                        On vacation

                                  You don’t call or write
                     
                                 Like you said you would

                                     Our future unravels
                                    
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Recieved 1st place in Brian's "a free choice" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2011 at 6:20 AM Congratulations Susan in the contest of Brian Strand "A Free Choice" Love, Carol

Elaine George July 16, 2011 at 4:07 PM Sensational Shape poetry, Susan. Very creative with very profound message. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

Debbie Guzzi July 16, 2011 at 1:41 PM Good visual, nice win..men and their promises. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2011 at 1:32 PM swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, beatrice!! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 16, 2011 at 11:31 AM Congrats Susan on your first place win with this elegant poetry my friend.. enjoy luv..

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2011 at 10:00 AM this is excellent shape poetry. GREAT title too. A big congrats to you in this older contest of brian's.

Joyce Johnson July 16, 2011 at 7:43 AM Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce