Strawberries

Strawberries bleeding onto my thumb,
The blood pulses, my heart is numb.
The juice that trickles onto my pale lips,
So sweet; but failing, my heart soon slips
Into the same stupor of silent mourning
As the strawberries, ripe and rotting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gifford Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Emotions expressed in a creative way. I like the way you use the strawberry for the image you express (ripe and rotting). Grief is felt in those lines. Great poem!
Austin Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 9:44 AM
This is a different food for thought. Congrats on the selection. daver
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 10:09 PM
A deep one. I like this kind of short poem that says so much in so few lines. Congrats on your win but should be much higher on the list.
Richards Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Thank you very much Juli Michelle......I was so pleased you liked my silly rhyming poem!! I must say I also love strawberries.....but reading this poem more than once, it seems to be a metaphor for something very sad.....wow, this is terrific. I love it!
A   Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Juli, congratulations... ... By the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE LINDA
Callus Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 6:20 AM
This is the strawberry (not the cherry) on the cake. Lovely write. // congrats on fine placing, too. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 3:02 AM
Sad yet a very lovely heartfelt poem ! Congrats on win Juli !!
Merrill Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Juli-Michelle, what a beautiful name. I like your poems too. I'm a rhyme dude (usually) so I appreciate yours. Strawberries is a good write and a fun read. Thanks for sharing! Hugs // mel
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:04 PM
- Great poem Juli-Michelle - - - I'm happy when I eat strawberries :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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