Stranger

I talked to a stranger last Monday
someone who crossed my path that day
someone who I may have known before though in a different place
he may have had a different name, different face 
but he had the same sad eyes, the same smell of cheap stale wine 
dressed in dirty ragged clothes worn by time and drudgery
there in the shadows of so many, many years before
long nights when time passed more slowly
and mornings dawning was oh so slow to come
I had met him there along the railroad lines
those ribbons of steel leading on to who knows where
I have met him in the back alleys of any given town
lying there in the shadows huddled against life’s miseries
a mind awash with dreadful distant memories
of life’s failures and horrors; those remnants of some foreign war
memories that leave him restless; adrift; unable to settle
with a need to constantly keep moving on
his mind now numbed by drugs or drink that at times
leaves him sprawled against some darkened door
I may have known him then; way back before this time
You may also have known him then
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Donald J Bennett, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
Bennett Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:24 AM
Back thru the years these folks were hobos, vagabonds, bums or drifters but now they are called homeless but they still appear the same as in the past and are still adrift. Thank you for your lovely comment as that means a lot to me.
Murray Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Hey stranger! Can we have some more poems from you? I love this one.
Bennett Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Comments such as this are what lifts the spirits and fills the heart of any writer and I thank you for yours.
Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Been there done that, this is an amazing poem Donald..
Bennett Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:53 AM
So pleased that you stopped by. I appreciate it.
Yuhas Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 6:21 PM
A great write Donald, they are all strangers we have known.
Bennett Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Thank you kind sir I really do appreciate folks taking time to read my work. That means so much to me.
George   Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Tortured lost souls! Sometimes life is more than we can bare. Sensational writing, Donald.
Bennett Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you my friend. So please that you stopped by and took the time to comment as each feed-back means a lot to me.
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Donald, this is a great write. I know exactly what stranger you're talking about. Nice to see you here.. Hugs SKAT
Bennett Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.
Sage Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:03 AM
Excellent write Donald
Bennett Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Your comment is appreciated. Thank you.
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