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I talked to a stranger last Monday someone who crossed my path that day someone who I may have known before though in a different place he may have had a different name, different face but he had the same sad eyes, the same smell of cheap stale wine dressed in dirty ragged clothes worn by time and drudgery there in the shadows of so many, many years before long nights when time passed more slowly and mornings dawning was oh so slow to come I had met him there along the railroad lines those ribbons of steel leading on to who knows where I have met him in the back alleys of any given town lying there in the shadows huddled against life’s miseries a mind awash with dreadful distant memories of life’s failures and horrors; those remnants of some foreign war memories that leave him restless; adrift; unable to settle with a need to constantly keep moving on his mind now numbed by drugs or drink that at times leaves him sprawled against some darkened door I may have known him then; way back before this time You may also have known him then

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/26/2016 9:57:00 PM
Donald J Bennett, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 3/27/2016 12:24:00 AM
Back thru the years these folks were hobos, vagabonds, bums or drifters but now they are called homeless but they still appear the same as in the past and are still adrift. Thank you for your lovely comment as that means a lot to me.
Date: 2/21/2016 4:50:00 PM
Hey stranger! Can we have some more poems from you? I love this one.
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 2/21/2016 9:12:00 PM
Comments such as this are what lifts the spirits and fills the heart of any writer and I thank you for yours.
Date: 2/11/2016 9:34:00 AM
Been there done that, this is an amazing poem Donald..
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 2/11/2016 10:53:00 AM
So pleased that you stopped by. I appreciate it.
Date: 1/11/2016 6:21:00 PM
A great write Donald, they are all strangers we have known.
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/11/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thank you kind sir I really do appreciate folks taking time to read my work. That means so much to me.
Date: 1/11/2016 2:28:00 PM
Tortured lost souls! Sometimes life is more than we can bare. Sensational writing, Donald.
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/11/2016 6:55:00 PM
Thank you my friend. So please that you stopped by and took the time to comment as each feed-back means a lot to me.
Date: 1/5/2016 8:10:00 PM
Donald, this is a great write. I know exactly what stranger you're talking about. Nice to see you here.. Hugs SKAT
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/6/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.
Date: 1/3/2016 1:03:00 AM
Excellent write Donald
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/3/2016 10:38:00 AM
Your comment is appreciated. Thank you.

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