Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Strange Steeds of the Sea

Strange Steeds of the Sea



Like the salubrious stallions that cordially carousel and carry me
Beneath the gainful galleons, you’ll find strange steeds of the sea
Wild horses of the aqua-blue precariously prancing by coral reefs
In their early equine debut, God's creatures exist amidst disbeliefs

Oceanic oddities the Hippocampus hybrids in a Mediterranean mist
Mysterious curiosities of bewitching beauty that creatively coexist
For what is their purpose a cross between the horse and finless fish
Perhaps it is the purchase of some little boys or girls whimsical wish.




April.19.2018
SEAHORSES
Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Juliet Ligon May 9, 2018 at 10:32 PM Great use of alliteration! Congratulations!

Sandra Haight May 9, 2018 at 8:24 AM Once again, ^WW^, great Alliteration, Rhyme, and imagery! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Line Gauthier May 8, 2018 at 10:59 PM Back with well deserved congrats, WW.

Susan Gentry May 8, 2018 at 10:08 PM Congratulations on your win with this delightful seahorse poem. Wonderful.

Michael Wegman May 8, 2018 at 7:59 PM WONDERFUL! GREAT FUN and IMAGERY. CONGRATS on a superb win!

Eve Roper May 8, 2018 at 7:17 PM ^WW^, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs

Janis Medders Tobechi May 8, 2018 at 5:51 PM Wonderful. magical write Winged Warrior. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards May 8, 2018 at 5:26 PM This was magical......and whimsical ....loved your summary !!! Well done, Winged Warrior !!!

Lisa Ricci April 26, 2018 at 8:08 AM Good Morning Winged. What can be said for an entry before us is "everything". I must admit the title caught my eye as I love the ocean however your words kept my attention. This entry is well thought out and the rhyme well executed and never forced. Thank you for sharing an entry that clearly is poetic and very much poetry. Best of luck with the contest.

Nette Onclaud April 21, 2018 at 5:23 PM WW, you left no stone unturned filling the page with references, images and assonance!... light and shine!.. huggs

Arturo Michael April 20, 2018 at 6:54 AM Or perhaps a horse that could swim like a fish...

Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2018 at 5:55 AM Very nice! GL on contest!

Line Gauthier April 19, 2018 at 1:33 PM Beautiful poem, WW.

Lin Lane April 19, 2018 at 1:09 PM That's some many-hued seahorse, WW. Your interior rhymes are quite good. Nicely written.

Vijay Pandit April 19, 2018 at 10:50 AM You captured this God's creation in lovely rhymes. And you gave them meaning with your creative lines: ...For what is their purpose a cross between the horse and finless fish...Perhaps it is the purchase of some little boys or girls whimsical wish. Well done, WW.