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Strange Steeds of the Sea

Strange Steeds of the Sea



Like the salubrious stallions that cordially carousel and carry me
Beneath the gainful galleons, you’ll find strange steeds of the sea
Wild horses of the aqua-blue precariously prancing by coral reefs
In their early equine debut, God's creatures exist amidst disbeliefs

Oceanic oddities the Hippocampus hybrids in a Mediterranean mist
Mysterious curiosities of bewitching beauty that creatively coexist
For what is their purpose a cross between the horse and finless fish
Perhaps it is the purchase of some little boys or girls whimsical wish.




April.19.2018
SEAHORSES
Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Juliet Ligon Date: 5/9/2018 10:32:00 PM Great use of alliteration! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 5/9/2018 8:24:00 AM Once again, ^WW^, great Alliteration, Rhyme, and imagery! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 5/8/2018 10:59:00 PM Back with well deserved congrats, WW. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 5/8/2018 10:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this delightful seahorse poem. Wonderful. Login to Reply

Michael Wegman Date: 5/8/2018 7:59:00 PM WONDERFUL! GREAT FUN and IMAGERY. CONGRATS on a superb win! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 5/8/2018 7:17:00 PM ^WW^, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 5/8/2018 5:51:00 PM Wonderful. magical write Winged Warrior. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/8/2018 5:26:00 PM This was magical......and whimsical ....loved your summary !!! Well done, Winged Warrior !!! Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 4/26/2018 8:08:00 AM Good Morning Winged. What can be said for an entry before us is "everything". I must admit the title caught my eye as I love the ocean however your words kept my attention. This entry is well thought out and the rhyme well executed and never forced. Thank you for sharing an entry that clearly is poetic and very much poetry. Best of luck with the contest. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/21/2018 5:23:00 PM WW, you left no stone unturned filling the page with references, images and assonance!... light and shine!.. huggs Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 4/20/2018 6:54:00 AM Or perhaps a horse that could swim like a fish... Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/20/2018 5:55:00 AM Very nice! GL on contest! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/19/2018 1:33:00 PM Beautiful poem, WW. Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 4/19/2018 1:09:00 PM That's some many-hued seahorse, WW. Your interior rhymes are quite good. Nicely written. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/19/2018 10:50:00 AM You captured this God's creation in lovely rhymes. And you gave them meaning with your creative lines: ...For what is their purpose a cross between the horse and finless fish...Perhaps it is the purchase of some little boys or girls whimsical wish. Well done, WW. Login to Reply