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Strange Steeds of the Sea

Strange Steeds of the Sea Like the salubrious stallions that cordially carousel and carry me Beneath the gainful galleons, you’ll find strange steeds of the sea Wild horses of the aqua-blue precariously prancing by coral reefs In their early equine debut, God's creatures exist amidst disbeliefs Oceanic oddities the Hippocampus hybrids in a Mediterranean mist Mysterious curiosities of bewitching beauty that creatively coexist For what is their purpose a cross between the horse and finless fish Perhaps it is the purchase of some little boys or girls whimsical wish. April.19.2018 SEAHORSES Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/9/2018 10:32:00 PM

Great use of alliteration! Congratulations!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/9/2018 8:24:00 AM

Once again, ^WW^, great Alliteration, Rhyme, and imagery! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/8/2018 10:59:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, WW.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/8/2018 10:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this delightful seahorse poem. Wonderful.

Michael Wegman

Date: 5/8/2018 7:59:00 PM

WONDERFUL! GREAT FUN and IMAGERY. CONGRATS on a superb win!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/8/2018 7:17:00 PM

^WW^, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 5/8/2018 5:51:00 PM

Wonderful. magical write Winged Warrior. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/8/2018 5:26:00 PM

This was magical......and whimsical ....loved your summary !!! Well done, Winged Warrior !!!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/26/2018 8:08:00 AM

Good Morning Winged. What can be said for an entry before us is "everything". I must admit the title caught my eye as I love the ocean however your words kept my attention. This entry is well thought out and the rhyme well executed and never forced. Thank you for sharing an entry that clearly is poetic and very much poetry. Best of luck with the contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2018 5:23:00 PM

WW, you left no stone unturned filling the page with references, images and assonance!... light and shine!.. huggs

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/20/2018 6:54:00 AM

Or perhaps a horse that could swim like a fish...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/20/2018 5:55:00 AM

Very nice! GL on contest!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/19/2018 1:33:00 PM

Beautiful poem, WW.

Lin Lane

Date: 4/19/2018 1:09:00 PM

That's some many-hued seahorse, WW. Your interior rhymes are quite good. Nicely written.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2018 10:50:00 AM

You captured this God's creation in lovely rhymes. And you gave them meaning with your creative lines: ...For what is their purpose a cross between the horse and finless fish...Perhaps it is the purchase of some little boys or girls whimsical wish. Well done, WW.