Strange School Ghoul

With a huge paper due at my school,
I had waited too late, like a fool.
For two days and all night
I sat typing; my plight -
went to bed feeling like a strange ghoul.

I awoke, numb from feet to my head;
Oh, my paper! I thought, with great dread. . . 
It’s some kind of a jerk
who can’t turn in her work!
I could not even rise from my bed!


Inspired by Carolyn Devonshire's Limericks: "Fruitless All-Nighter"
For john Freeman's contest: "A Double Limerick Inspiration"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cavanaugh Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Another great limerick and another great win. You are quite the accomplished poet. Bravo!
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations to you Andrea on your win in John Freeman and Carolyn Devonshire's shared contest "Double Limerick Inspiration". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:07 PM
Very funny Andrea. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Scripca Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Congrats for your well deserved win. Alll the best, Iolanda
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in the Double Limerick contest with this great piece.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend.. for a well deserved win this happy Sunday.. yeah..luv from Italy...
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Thanks Andrea fo the special effort on your part, and congratulation on your place in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
Chachere Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 6:31 PM
its never good to do this & procrastinate. i know that feeling all too well from my past. lol.calling yourself a jerk.i can relate! ~Always&Forever Lynette
Sweetheart Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:50 PM
Really cool Andrea.. good luck in the contest.. and appreciate your great comments tonight.. my friend.. sunning all day has made me too tired but am trying to get caught up... and hope u enter my new contest too... appreciate your encouragement for the contest entries.. could not think what would rhyme with mayo so thought about paying at the register as tomatoes are so expensive..luv.. thankxxx..tomorrow is another day to quote Scarlett O'Hara..haha..
Walters Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Sounds like some of the nightmares I still have now and again about high school/college! Wonderful limericks :) hugs, kris
Austin Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Obviously, "numb from feet to head," what you needed was a nice cup of coffee. Read my latest - not so great, but I'm in a writing hole right now. Lave,Dave
Kapoor Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 5:00 AM
Great sense of humor and beautiful write. You have sketched what many of us may have faced somewhere in our life. Great write from your seasoned pen. Good luck in the contest. And many thanks for your valuable comments on Patradoot 25 and 26. Love and best wishes......Ravindra........Andrea Dietrich
Kelly Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:02 AM
Whatever about the school paper , AD , you do have away with poetic words . Best of luck in the contest ...
Mehta Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:47 PM
A nice inspiration of Carolyn's Limerick. Good luck in the contest
Mossburg Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:59 PM
This sounds really familiar. I tried to get my daughter to avoid this trap but, alas, my words fell on deaf ears. lol. Thanks again for reading my poems and commenting on them. I'm glad you found "Days of Long Ago". It is one of my own favorites. Life is full of distractions which make it difficult to concentrate on my writing. I need to try. Steve
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