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Strange Return

It was just an old ravish smile that caused me alarm, when all those years ago you first resonated within my chronic confusion. I thought you were my father back from the dead, remembering he was never slow in creating lattices of fabrication either. After what seems an eon it is so strange meeting you again, the wallpaper as changed yet here you are, with your haunting ravish smile invading my affliction, which just ambles on, till once more I feel the warmth of wellness. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 3/25/2021 9:33:00 PM
"the wallpaper as changed" makes me think that the wallpaper had something in it to bring your father and the memories of him to the surface. This is an excellent write, Harry. Saved to my favorites to read again. Hope you have a wonderful weekend :)
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Date: 9/16/2020 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations Harry on your win emotional and reminiscent. Enjoyed reading this valued piece of yours my friend...
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Date: 8/31/2020 5:08:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Harry.
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Date: 8/30/2020 8:47:00 AM
Harry I can relate to your poem as I've had a similar experience... Well written
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Date: 8/29/2020 5:22:00 AM
Your imagery is always breathtaking Harry and all your poems are thought provoking, this one brings back emotional memories - congratulations on your win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
Amazing how something as simple as a familiar smile can take us back into another time period! Powerfully penned with some amazing images, Harry. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/28/2020 1:52:00 AM
- A look back in time ... maybe memories we had forgotten ... beautifully written, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:12:00 PM
wow, SO good, harry. A hearty congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/25/2020 8:30:00 AM
A powerful write, Harry--every like evokes emotion and memory.
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Date: 8/24/2020 2:40:00 PM
Sometimes memories are harder to get rid of than the people they represent! Nicely conceived and penned, Harry. Light and Luminescence, Gershon
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Date: 8/24/2020 12:00:00 PM
Sometimes it isn't even necessary to go back across the miles. We can return in our mind and see old faces and hear their voices and it's just like being there. Remembering good times and bad times and things we did together. A fine piece Harry. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/24/2020 7:30:00 AM
Nothing is more touching then a sensitive return to the home we once knew, Well writer Harry, sending you winning wishes and a hug across the miles, be well.
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Date: 8/23/2020 8:28:00 AM
Old memories can stir up much sadness, beautiful write, best of luck in the contest-
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