Strange Paradox


seventeen Septembers savored
    sweet, sober joy - strange paradox
        sampling life’s effusive flavors
            intoxicating skyward thoughts
                inexplicably-found favor


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for the Remember September Poetry Contest
sponsored by Andrea Dietrich 
written on 09/18/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Sounds like first love to me, Jeff: Cleverly expressed. Congratulations on your winning poem. SuZ
Miller Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 12:39 AM
A very meaningful poem, Jeff; congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 7:52 PM
This makes me curious to know what made it sweet and sober at the same time. It needs a part two!! Congrats in my contest.
Wolf Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 8:06 PM
Strangest 'Pair of Docs' I've ever read about, Jeff. ~ Ben Casey
Rose  Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 3:15 PM
This is a very meaningful poem, gl in the contest, you got my vote already
Kyser Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 3:44 PM
Thanks so much! Have a blessed evening
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