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8/17/2024 for G Forms - Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Strange Life

Life:
a strange trip
undertaken alone,
by ghostly bodies,
encountering a variety of faces
atop the figures
of other solitary travelers,
searching 
for someone
to touch.
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La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 10:39 AM
David, , congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, wonderful, Constance
Crandall Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Thanks again Constance!
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Great to see your work honored on the winners' list in Constance's contest. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 1:00 PM
Shades and saints. Congratulations Dave! :)
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 3:33 PM
Thanks elle!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 7:42 AM
First two lines, indeed trippy! Love your Grook! Congrats!
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 10:11 AM
haha, I think the Grateful Dead said it first, "what a long, strange trip it's been"
mysore Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Life is a trip alone, beautifully written dear poet. congratulations.
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 9:28 AM
Thanks Thriveni
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:06 PM
Hello David Crandall, Wow! Yes lif4e is strange. I agree. yes I agree. some people are searcnhing for someone to touch. Enjoy your evening my cfriend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Hello David Crandall, You are welcome. Oh! These are lines from a song! Oh! it is the strangest life i agree. Enjoy your day my friend.;/ Darlene/
Crandall Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:17 PM
thanks Darlene. There are these lines from a song "this is the strangest life I've ever known".
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