Sara Kendrick Poet Tail-rhyme

Strange Analysis

It sits staring blankly at me
It says come here just try and see
Helping is what I do

Come on over is only plea
Free to come, free to go sweet pea
Try it bid weight adieu

AAB,AAB, 8,8,6..8,8,6

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Doris Culverhouse August 9, 2011 at 8:54 AM congrats on the hm!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2011 at 4:39 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Robert Johnson August 8, 2011 at 10:43 AM When we seek advice from others. Sometimes we'd rather stay under the covers. To crawl out in the cold cruel world. Leaves to truth to be unfurled.

Jack Horne August 7, 2011 at 11:10 AM Quick congrats before I get logged out again!

Kash Poet August 7, 2011 at 10:15 AM Congratulations Sara on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest.Enjoyed your poem.

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 6:50 AM wonderful, sara..a joy to read with matching congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 6, 2011 at 1:08 AM Congrats Sara on your HM in the contest my friend with this wonderful write .. very interesting piece luv.. enjoy honor..

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 9:26 PM what is it, Sara? My mind is blank tonight i think! Congrats on the HM. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta August 5, 2011 at 5:17 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, sara

Doris Culverhouse August 2, 2011 at 6:39 PM funny if it didn't hurt so much.....

Constance La France August 2, 2011 at 2:42 PM best of luck in the contest with this wonderful tail rhyme and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry~~

Cory Long August 2, 2011 at 2:33 PM good luck in the contest with this sure winner cory

Bob Quigley August 2, 2011 at 2:22 PM Well done Sara. Good luck on the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 2, 2011 at 1:49 PM Thanks for the entry

Steven Henderson August 2, 2011 at 1:23 PM Left me with a smile Sara! Thanks for sharing! Steve