Strange

elephants dreaming of orange shaped fish
cornflowers surfing down pickle strewn paths
great crested grebes with thorns in their hooves
suitcases drunk in a queue for a stamp
bottles of trousers with books on their heads
welders in carpets abstaining from plugs
books in a curry with no one to flush
my dream is now over 
so tell no one,,,hush
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 12:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:32 PM
BRIAN, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
Mac Donald Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Oh, "Strange" indeed, Brian! Sounds like a modern day Picasso dream. Fun and fascinating imagery! Lots happening, and yes this makes me think of Picasso!:) Best wishe, Mikki
Nelson Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:57 AM
very abstract, most people dont realise abstract have themes that tie together for a bigger picture and an underlying message
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