Stranded

I am bound for home, A little after midnight After an earthly nightly owl, Over wines, songs and dances The wee hours till we adjourned. While driving in a wooded area When a sudden downpour With a big thunder climaxed me around With total darkness and a blackout prevailed Then, my car slowed to a stop And stranded in the middle of nowhere Oh, I have an empty fuel, my goodness! This very untimely and unfortunate Opportune misgiving on my part! Thinking of some of my remedial intuitions My cell phone is dead! At last, a car light at my back Perhaps a law enforcer Or, maybe somebody came to a rescue A loud knock at my left window Pointing my flashlight where the knock came I saw a… lady in a white gown smiling at me!!
Dalila Agtani 4/26/12 Entered in a contest: Sponsor Gail Doyle Contest Name: Stranded
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May 1, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Yay, I finally got to post my comment! I was typing that the other day when my connection went out so I just saved it and re-posted it right now-- yes internet here in the Philippines sucks, I can imagine how worse it is in the barrios.... I hope all is well with you dear Dalila :D hugs to you!! Thanks for always remembring me :D Your visitor must be there with you right now..
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May 1, 2012 at 9:43 AM
Eeek! I sure hope it was not a white lady as in ghost white lady in Philippine folklore-- that would be so freaky o_O! I really enjoyed this one, I like the suspense, Dalila :D Thanks so much for passing by-- that's really great how you visited your friend with cancer instead-- I am sure she appreciated your gesture so much...there are some websites where you can see origami if you are interested :D I hope all is well with you, dear & that your visitor will have a great time May1 hugs to you! :)
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April 26, 2012 at 8:59 AM
A good write! Your poem reminds me. Have you ever read the Phantom Hitchhiker. It's an awsome ghost story. Your poem seems almost a prelude to it.
Debrosse Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 6:28 AM
Really like the setting, full of suspense, and the ending is shocking!
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