Straight up
Jack and Jim stood up to sing a hymn
Jack's voice broke
Jim's did choke
Both did croak
Through their pain
They both did gain
Praise in heav'n for singing to Him
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.
