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Straight To the Point

>>1111>>STRAIGHT TO THE POINT<<1111<< Straight to the point, No stopping this, I'm your rival, This life is about survival, Or survival of the fittest? The dopest most explosive lyrical genius writing this, Beats are tight and vital, About to take and claim my title, I'm a nineties dirty ghetto kid, Accessing detailed memories through subconscious files, Skateboard connected to my feet grounded, Pen and paper writing for miles, Embracing life in a system of madness, Always doin my best with a huge smile, While fully grateful, Within the game with no shame, On a different level, Nothing is ever the same, Imagination left wild, Positive tendencies learnt through experiments, Some failed, Listening to greenthumb, inhale, Giving anything a go, within a system i'm not labeled, Minds collectively lacking cognition, Brain function disabled, Getting a message across in rhyme, Mailed to your mind, Will it consciously reach ya? teach ya? My krew never far, we have a laugh, And hit the footpath, Skating to a spot with steez, Stomping tricks but it’s not enough, Gotta skate fast and master our craft on film, A skate process of learning patience and pain, Falling constantly, never giving up, Fully mindful maneuvers landed consistently, Converting new skate knowledge to life instantly, Brain cells firing with high energy form electricity, Synapse resurrected for the very first time, Elevating effectively with positivity and productive activity, In the eyes of society I’m on the same level as workers in a factory, Trapped but found my way out, On an alternative route, I’ve knelt, To the source creating all of our force, A seeker without remorse cause that don’t matter, There’s no deity creator, Just innocent ignorant talking as a hater, Instead be like ill mind of Hopsin seven, Questioning sin, Dismiss, Listen up, I gotta state this, This strategic system using the majority of countries citizens, What I’m consciously witnessing from a distance in the South pacific, Is insanity at its core to be specific, Writing from my imagination sober and sometimes stoned, Striving for balance, On my skateboard I feel the same, Sending this out, You know my name, Just another street nobody with fame within my clan, My man Fury this is for you Homie.

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Date: 11/27/2015 9:55:00 AM
WOW - this piece is extremely "DOPE!" I enjoyed the read! Love the rap! Well done and a 7! Pandita
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Quincy Mac
Date: 12/2/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Pandita, Stoked you enjoyed reading this piece. Aroha, Quincy Mac
Date: 11/21/2015 1:05:00 PM
A strong and outstanding dedication. Love LINDA
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Quincy Mac
Date: 11/21/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thank Linda :) Aroha, Quincy Mac

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