Caryl Muzzey Poet Choka

Straight Back Chair

This old straight back chair,
leaned back against kitchen wall.
Dad set me on scrawny lap;
tired face in hands.
Said I yuv my feety dad.
His smile just a memory...

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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James Fraser June 8, 2011 at 2:16 PM Delightful images Caryl of a youngster sitting on her dads knee, as so many of us have. Good luck in Rick's contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta June 5, 2011 at 6:42 PM Nicely interpreted picture in the contest, Caryl

Michael J. Falotico June 5, 2011 at 11:22 AM Beautiful write and a wondeful memory you have written... best of luck to you...Michael

Carolyn Devonshire June 5, 2011 at 10:40 AM Genuinely moving, Caryl. What a lovely memory you have of your father. I was blessed with a loving Dad too, but so many have had parents that were not good to them. Excellent entry for Rick's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 10:09 AM so precious Caryl and I was so close to my Daddy too who is gone now.. sweet memories for sure..good luck in the contest with this touching and tender write luv..

Wilma Neels June 5, 2011 at 9:56 AM Caryl, I love how your personalize this beauty. Wishing you all the best with this gem. Hope your Sunday is a great one :)