Stowaways

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Stowaways. . Calm tepid waters glorious golden sky Two lovelorn newly wed castaways My sweet love and I Sailing onward to warmer climbs A daring thrilling adventure Leaving the troublesome past behind Out of sight out of mind . Sipping away on some secluded wave kissed beach Far from home and now Out of reach Making love among The rippling caressing cooling waves On blistering hot Tropical days . Building a love nest within a tree To watch the diamond stars sparkle From a velvet pin cushion sky And view the restless sea Naked blissfully happy So intensely in love And like the gulls above Finally free . Alone as one Not having to please anyone In a secluded secret place No one can find us. All tension evaporated Anxieties gone. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/2/2021 8:00:00 AM

there is such a beach near me..like this one a lot, especially the last stanza :)

Peter Dome
Date: 1/2/2021 3:30:00 PM

Well lets go there kitten. get your paws wet. A pebbled beach no doubt. love the sea. Maybe we could stowaway aboard a ship. and end up swimming in a blue secret lagoon, under the stats and moon. Haha. thank you. glad you liked it take care.Pete.

Rob Levasseur

Date: 12/31/2020 7:40:00 AM

What a wonderfully created piece of verse Peter!

Peter Dome
Date: 12/31/2020 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Rob. They do say a picture paints a thousand words. take care and a good year for you. Pete.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/31/2020 2:03:00 AM

Very romantic. Reminds me of the Blue Lagoon film. Happy New Year. ~~

Peter Dome
Date: 12/31/2020 9:23:00 AM

Hi Victor. reminded me of the same film. hope you are ok.Stay safe and a happier new year to you. Pete.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2020 9:54:00 PM

I think you write for so many of us, Peter. This is a beautiful fulfilling poem, just love it.....All the best for the New Year...

Peter Dome
Date: 12/31/2020 9:26:00 AM

Hi Harry thank you for your kind words. How I wish it were true. take care my friend. A good year to you.Pete