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Stowaways

Stowaways.  
.
Calm tepid waters glorious golden sky
Two lovelorn newly wed castaways
My sweet love and I
Sailing onward to warmer climbs
A daring thrilling adventure
Leaving the troublesome past behind
Out of sight out of mind
.
Sipping away on some secluded wave kissed beach
Far from home and now
Out of reach
Making love among
The rippling caressing cooling waves
On blistering hot 
Tropical days
.
Building a love nest within a tree
To watch the diamond stars sparkle
From a velvet pin cushion  sky
And view the restless sea
Naked blissfully happy
So intensely in love 
And like the gulls above
Finally free
.
Alone as one
Not having to please anyone
In a secluded secret place
No one can find us.
All tension evaporated
Anxieties gone.
.
Peter Dome©2020.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Puddifoot Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 8:00 AM
there is such a beach near me..like this one a lot, especially the last stanza :)
Dome Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Well lets go there kitten. get your paws wet. A pebbled beach no doubt. love the sea. Maybe we could stowaway aboard a ship. and end up swimming in a blue secret lagoon, under the stats and moon. Haha. thank you. glad you liked it take care.Pete.
Levasseur Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:40 AM
What a wonderfully created piece of verse Peter!
Dome Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Rob. They do say a picture paints a thousand words. take care and a good year for you. Pete.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Very romantic. Reminds me of the Blue Lagoon film. Happy New Year. ~~
Dome Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Hi Victor. reminded me of the same film. hope you are ok.Stay safe and a happier new year to you. Pete.
Horsman Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 9:54 PM
I think you write for so many of us, Peter. This is a beautiful fulfilling poem, just love it.....All the best for the New Year...
Dome Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Hi Harry thank you for your kind words. How I wish it were true. take care my friend. A good year to you.Pete
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