Storyteller (Nonet #1)

Shadows cover the bullet by half. Father buck scavenges berries. Offspring of His fathers faith. Man waits high in the larch. Cumbersome stomach. Rifle prepared. Trustworthy. Patient. Time.
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Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 3:13 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor James and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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October 25, 2009 at 1:37 PM
So much depth for the reader to ponder about. Good use of this concise form. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
George   Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Hi James, This is a wonderful Nonet. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Fraser Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Thank you for sharing this awesome poem James. Love, Carol
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September 27, 2009 at 8:15 PM
Author notes This poem is written in two major, and one non major forms of poetry. Main form is written in the Nonet form of poetry: "The nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second eight and so forth until the last line closes with one syllable. The subject can be anything the poet wishes and there is no mandatory rhyme scheme."
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September 26, 2009 at 7:54 PM
It is a great composition. You did very well with it. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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