Story Time

A warm sultry summers night, a silver crystal formed in
the corner of an eye. Trickled and rolled a gentle cheek,
fell to earth where all was dry. Whence it touched the 
ground did speak, an Orchid bloomed of vibrant hues,
reds and whites, the palest blues. The Tear catcher dabbed 
the bluest eye, a smile pursued a gentle sigh. The catcher
kissed is favourite friend, his purses full to the night did
blend..
Eerk, eerk the frog he croaked, help us Flora the pool is
choked, eerk, eerk and off he hopped, Flora followed
her duties swapped. By the pool, eyes in moonbeams 
danced, their love of Flora is well romanced. Flora, Flora 
help us please, the pool is choked by a blue disease. The
fish gasped and gulped for air, wildfowl preened their
feathers fair, otters, voles in a sticky mass, frogs and
toads could not pass. The sedge, the reed, heads did fall,
marigolds and lily's, threatened by this seedy sprawl. 
With her hands she ceased the breeze, asked for quiet 
from the trees. Beckoned all the spiders to the waters 
edge, north to south along the sedge. Said to the spiders 
cross your legs,  spin, spin with all your might, those 
silver threads strong and tight. To the Water Boatmen
she said pull, pull, until your net is full. Water Beatles
heaved and toiled, with insect life the water broiled.
Dragonflies with smaller nets collected dregs, Toads
and Frogs flipped with longer legs. The Newts and 
Fowl came to assist, where once was dark the moon
it kissed. Across the pool the Voles and Otters pulled 
away, most did work but some did play. To the sticky
web the Algae clings, behind a bright blue water sings.
The silver net was dragged well clear, all  had helped 
from far and near.
Flora asked the breeze to bring the clouds, left a message
for the sun to hide his head, but to keep her friends warm
in the shade. For without the rays the Algae would die, 
and all would be peace and beauty before the eye. Dawn
was close, time for Flora to pat, stroke and kiss her pals
goodbye. She must return to the safety of the glade and
to the shade of the magic willow, her bed of moss and 
Lavender for a pillow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Owens Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 5:21 PM
I love your story...makes me want to be in that magical place...Enjoyed...Marty
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January 31, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Daniel, I don't know whether you have entered the Poetry Soup contest yet, but I think this poem would be a good entry. You will need to select a poetic form if you enter this one, though. Here are a few that you might consider: pastoral, Prose Poetry, narrative. I think that Pastoral is the closest. But it has fantasy in it, too.... Just trying to help. I really like this poem...a lot! Dane Ann
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January 31, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Wow, Daniel. That is the most whimsical nature conservation poem that I have ever read. It is like a beautiful fairytale. Keep your poetry flowing. t is wonderful. Smiles... Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 10:14 AM
And quite the nature story too!! Lots of really nice description here. The lines about the spiders, for example! Yes, this would be a narrative, as Linda said. About my wife poem, it was not me, which some may think, but I do believe people give up to easily on marriage. Mine was not easy and I wish all people would "hang in there" for the long haul. LUv, Andrea
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January 31, 2010 at 10:04 AM
I like the personification, using "Flora" as a character who sounds human, perhaps divine, Daniel. Having all of the creatures come together to rid the pond of this algae is the way I hope humans may someday learn to work in unison. All are threatened when any species in nature's order is endangered. Very clever and insightful write, Daniel! Love, Carolyn
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January 31, 2010 at 7:41 AM
Absolutely exotically beautiful.. would classify is as a narrative form of poetry.. with beautiful descriptive lines and words.. excellent Daniel... a true classic piece of poetry.. I was thinking of writing about Orchids today ..they are my favorite ... interesting how themes blend together.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Palli Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Lovely story
Clark Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Another wonderful expression. I enjoy the tearcatcher character! Would make a great childrens book!!! But you are probably already on that! Jeralynn
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