Story From An Impoverished Heart 1

The world turned silent with a strange discourse.
A sadness covered with its darker shade,
To extinguish heart's light without remorse,
And blinded the eyes when its light did fade.
Captured by darkness enduring its pain,
Lost in this world, a now hidden face.
All the tomorrows will find only rain.
Touched by madness that my sorrows embrace.
Dying within with a heart that won't glow.
Frightened by silence when pauses depart.
Alone on an edge with nothing below.
This lonely despair, this sadness, this heart.

To weep in the mist where loneliness feeds.
As this severed heart lays open, now bleeds.

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January 26, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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January 18, 2016 at 8:49 AM
FREDERIC, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Congratulations on your win with this moving poem that grips the heart!
Inman Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Beautifully written Frederic. I love the end couplet. The form helps to make the poem (sad sonnet).
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:13 PM
such an emotional sonnet Frederic many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Oh my! This really hit me hard... Congratulations on the win with this soulful sorrowful poem. A 7
George   Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Such profound emotions conveyed in this sonnet Frederic. Thank you for sharing.
Nunez Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 6:23 PM
You captured sadness and despair of a gutted heart with such delicacy in word choices. Again, you've treated this reader with the fluidity and grace of your lines. A7 and fav.
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