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Story Book Castle

~ ~ "Still round the corner there may wait, a new road or a secret gate." J.R.R. Tolkien ~ In the dim, dank gloom, looming high on the hill By the cold, somber waters, deep, dark and still I stumbled, then glanced, a dim cloistered fortress A brooding old place with a story to tell A forgotten old castle, with moss covered stones On the edge of a forest, with mist in the sound It is riddled with mystery, not a soul to be found Yet my curious nature, compells to trespass all around Near the top gabled window, does a wizard look down? Waiting the chance to cast his spell to my crown I nervously wonder, will my footsteps be heard Will a flash of his wand, cause his wrath to disturb? The arched bolted doors, have weathered the storms I timidly knock, yet the doors guard the lore Nothing shouts out, not a bell left to chime Nothing is here, but an old nursery rhyme So I sit and I ponder, should I wander back home? Should I continue my search for the fantasy gnome? I will take home a story, be it sweet dreams, or gory… And I’ll write a new fable….of the Castle Book Story ~ Inspired By Tracie’s Contest: In a land called fantasy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 12:22:00 AM
CARRIE, first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! also congratulations on your win,..p.d.
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Date: 11/23/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "In a land called fantasy" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:37:00 PM
Loved your write Carrie.... really enjoyed all the detail and scenario. Felt like I was in the elfen forest... Cool. Thanks for your nice comment. Congratulations to you on this inspired work of yours and the richly deserved win
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a superb win for this great entry...excellent lines for the contest luv..
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:19:00 PM
Nicely done Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/19/2011 10:07:00 AM
that was great Carrie, loved reading it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/19/2011 9:26:00 AM
I love the title that pulls us in and then the words of a true poet seranade us throughout.... wonderful write....luv Michael
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