Story

I'm just writing my story
Leaving out all the glory
I never tore them; yet the pages and spine are all but broken
Its letters are scattered, yet still the words form a concise omen
Would you read it back to me slowly, please, as you reach the bitter ending?
It hurts my eyes, you see; this heart could use a break from all this bending.....
Being devoured alive inside is such a epic novel unsavory
Moments, however, are kept in order by thoughts of your light upon my gnomon
They just keep coming, though without a care as to whether or not they are heartrending
It's so sour to own a form of pain that is this condescending
A barren land uncultivated and so divided from this yeoman
Painless by comparison to a nose job given by the grindstone of life's knavery
Just as I finished; then, the ink ran dry right before me..... 
It's in this here and now that I've broken out
I wanna scream, but they drown out every shout
Then I think of all the things I ought not talk about:
Have they ever not been a couple minutes too late?
Do they ever have their story straight?
Inside me, hope has made its case to abate....
Hung from ropes unknown, can you relate?
Am I the world's least astute gadabout?
What I feel is that my intentions are drawn and quartered; based fully on others' self-doubt 
But there is no way I will let this point of pitiful; be an excuse to live life by copping out
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Date: 9/27/2024 2:52:00 PM
Sweet friend, I am so encouraged by your recent visit to my poem. As for this poem of yours, it's so real, so honest..."Moments, however, are kept in order by thoughts of your light upon my gnomon" how did you get something like that?! Wow. And I hope that you have a truly good day today....that's an understatement....a truly blessing to your life, is what I mean. xxoo A fav this is-
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Date: 9/27/2024 6:22:00 PM
Finding happiness is just being able to understand that it is always there you only need to grab it and hold onto it with both hands. I feel so blessed by your consistant support! It is so easy to give you encouragement Paige you are a briliant writer! Also a dear friend... Warmest regards A.S.
Date: 9/22/2024 7:05:00 AM
profound story dear poet. Happy writing. Be happy.
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Date: 9/22/2024 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Thriveni, for the happy wishes. As well as the compliment!
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