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On a cold, stormy October night, In the hours of lingering twilight. Beneath the haunting full moon, Brought a white ghostly goon, Screaming fears of an ancient rune. The wind driven underneath eaves, Interlacing through trees and leaves, Scratching on the window-glass, With intense bitterness as shadows pass. Slumber and dreams haunted by the crass, Slow, flowing sand in the hourglass. Tap, tap, tap we hear at the door. In terror, open the door. There, four Puddles of water left on the floor. Darkness peering in beneath The fog, the dog, a bone between its teeth. 10/13/2022 12-16 Lines Of A Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 12/6/2022 11:23:00 PM
NVBWhat fun! You really had me going, Eve! I could feel the cold, the wind; hear the leaves, water dripping, and the tapping at the door. Y,’all had active imaginations & got mine right there with you. So I may be quite wrong about my interpretation, but I had a good laugh at the end when your “ghostly” pup came in casting a bone & his paws making puddles. You worked the senses to the bone. Bravo! Great scare! Hugs, sLly
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Date: 10/31/2022 2:10:00 AM
Beautifully spooky.
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Date: 10/30/2022 9:01:00 PM
Wonderfully creepy Eve and very vivid - truly a scary tale. I love the sound effects now that my heart has dropped out of my throat! So well written my friend. Happy Halloween and a blessed All Saints and Souls Day dear friend.
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:35:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with creative poem with an unexpected ending!
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Date: 10/23/2022 7:14:00 PM
I enjoyed the easy flow and rhyme, intertwined with Halloween horrors and an unexpected twist... All in all a great poem for the contest! Best wishes!
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Date: 10/19/2022 4:55:00 AM
Delightful ~
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Date: 10/18/2022 2:20:00 AM
Beautifully rhyming and highly imaginative ! The 'tap tap' sound itself is frightening on a chilly October night. A well written poem keeping up with the spirit of Halloween.....All the Best, Eve
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Date: 10/17/2022 4:16:00 PM
A well written enjoyable poem to read Eve. love phyl
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Date: 10/14/2022 10:20:00 AM
Great one Eve. Well written, catches the readers full attention. I enjoyed :)
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Date: 10/14/2022 8:01:00 AM
Eve, you have such a gift for writing. Your vivid imagery, along with the elegant use of words, added an additional layer of splendor to the amazing poetry you wrote.
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Date: 10/14/2022 2:03:00 AM
Well composed Halloween poem. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/14/2022 12:14:00 AM
Enjoyable write ! Nice to share.
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Date: 10/13/2022 11:29:00 PM
lol It was only the dog but the mind said something more sinister... Wonderful Eve...
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Date: 10/13/2022 10:10:00 PM
Great rhyming, Eve, a good entry for the contest. Good luck! Bill
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