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What Bones Can Dogs Eat? It’s a Little More Complicated Than You  Thought

Stormy October Night

On a cold, stormy October night, 
    In the hours of lingering twilight. 
      Beneath the haunting full moon, 
        Brought a white ghostly goon, 
          Screaming fears of an ancient rune. 

  The wind driven underneath eaves, 
    Interlacing through trees and leaves, 
      Scratching on the window-glass, 
        With intense bitterness as shadows pass.  
          Slumber and dreams haunted by the crass,
            Slow, flowing sand in the hourglass. 

  Tap, tap, tap we hear at the door. 
    In terror, open the door. There, four 
      Puddles of water left on the floor. 
        Darkness peering in beneath
          The fog, the dog, a bone between its teeth.


10/13/2022

12-16 Lines Of A Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Eslinger Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 11:23 PM
NVBWhat fun! You really had me going, Eve! I could feel the cold, the wind; hear the leaves, water dripping, and the tapping at the door. Y,’all had active imaginations & got mine right there with you. So I may be quite wrong about my interpretation, but I had a good laugh at the end when your “ghostly” pup came in casting a bone & his paws making puddles. You worked the senses to the bone. Bravo! Great scare! Hugs, sLly
Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 2:10 AM
Beautifully spooky.
Kauffman Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:01 PM
Wonderfully creepy Eve and very vivid - truly a scary tale. I love the sound effects now that my heart has dropped out of my throat! So well written my friend. Happy Halloween and a blessed All Saints and Souls Day dear friend.
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with creative poem with an unexpected ending!
Deschler Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 7:14 PM
I enjoyed the easy flow and rhyme, intertwined with Halloween horrors and an unexpected twist... All in all a great poem for the contest! Best wishes!
Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Delightful ~
George Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 2:20 AM
Beautifully rhyming and highly imaginative ! The 'tap tap' sound itself is frightening on a chilly October night. A well written poem keeping up with the spirit of Halloween.....All the Best, Eve
Babcock Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 4:16 PM
A well written enjoyable poem to read Eve. love phyl
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Great one Eve. Well written, catches the readers full attention. I enjoyed :)
Poet Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 8:01 AM
Eve, you have such a gift for writing. Your vivid imagery, along with the elegant use of words, added an additional layer of splendor to the amazing poetry you wrote.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Well composed Halloween poem. Enjoyed it.
Singh Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:14 AM
Enjoyable write ! Nice to share.
Tor Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 11:29 PM
lol It was only the dog but the mind said something more sinister... Wonderful Eve...
Baker Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 10:10 PM
Great rhyming, Eve, a good entry for the contest. Good luck! Bill
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