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Stormy Monday

Sheet whites billow into balloons then thin to sickled moons; light oozing out in an opaline Day-Glo… Rich mist spreads, spraying wider milk-bright swirls of a snowstorm… Yetling wind turns into yeti, crazy! Mountain’s giant sham of eiders’ fluffy-soft; so newly hatched penguin, deep-dives into ice-bird: A hard-beaked miasma yielding as diamond ply… (12/22/2022 For Winter Storm contest)

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Date: 1/21/2023 10:36:00 AM
So different and so good. Wonderful imagery Susan. Loved the read. Thank you! Cheers - Gary
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/21/2023 11:27:00 PM
thank you, and glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 12/29/2022 8:39:00 AM
Your signature imagery is stunning with a touch of humor. Susan, Bol in the contest!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/29/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you :))
Date: 12/24/2022 4:45:00 PM
Certainly a fine write capturing snowstorm images. I am sure that your submission will do very well in the contest. Best of luck. Sincere good wishes, Brian
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/24/2022 4:51:00 PM
Thank you :))
Date: 12/23/2022 5:52:00 AM
Spectacular penning! My best to you in the contest :))) xomo
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/23/2022 8:37:00 AM
Thank you! Merry Christmas:))
Date: 12/23/2022 3:42:00 AM
Wonderful write. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/23/2022 8:36:00 AM
Thank you..Merry Christmas :)
Date: 12/22/2022 11:04:00 PM
Very deep, beautiful and unique imagery, Susan:)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/23/2022 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Jo.. merry Christmas :)

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