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Stormy Heart

Heavy flashes smother summer, fierce skies threatens thunder Drowned window pane mimics her heartbreaking, crying its related pain As she saddens, storm drenching, suddenly there was more tightening She grabs holding pillow tightening, tightening breath she attains Drenched pillow under her face, squeezing her heart in grief she attains Heartbroken from her lover, emotion can not refrain He however is heartbroken because he too lost his lover His anger growing louder as his heart beats insane Eagerly he wished the sorrow-fiery heart would mellow Light from sky composed of yellow-yellow for the bolts sustain The dark cast of dramatic breakdown shows its sustain Heartbroken from his lover, emotion can not refrain The clouds clashing bolts suppressing-unevenly in the stormy roaring Outcast seen-lovers seen and believe owned hearts beat each moment unexplained Soaked lips pressed together, lovers fight to remain forever Stormy hearts violent as the weather, each heart beating a hurricane Tear drops falling faster than the rain, yet letting go of feelings of vein Heartbreak gone and can refrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/17/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. What a interesting style you have. Very creative and somewhat complex. I like this one very much.
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Date: 12/16/2011 10:35:00 AM
Did you read my "Stormy Heart? Because I wrote two years ago? Pieces are very similar.
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ashley. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:06:00 PM
beautiful passionate expressions , Ashley
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:58:00 AM
stormy emotions stormy weather, but that kissed could last forever, in blue skies or cloudy days, let's hope that love doesn't see any more rainy days. :) enjoyed reading your poem.
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