Stormy Heart

Heavy flashes smother summer, fierce skies threatens thunder
Drowned window pane mimics her heartbreaking, crying its related pain
As she saddens, storm drenching, suddenly there was more tightening
She grabs holding pillow tightening, tightening breath she attains
Drenched pillow under her face, squeezing her heart in grief she attains
                          Heartbroken from her lover, emotion can not refrain 

He however is heartbroken because he too lost his lover
His anger growing louder as his heart beats insane
Eagerly he wished the sorrow-fiery heart would mellow
Light from sky composed of yellow-yellow for the bolts sustain
The dark cast of dramatic breakdown shows its sustain
                          Heartbroken from his lover, emotion can not refrain 

The clouds clashing bolts suppressing-unevenly in the stormy roaring
Outcast seen-lovers seen and believe owned hearts beat each moment unexplained 
Soaked lips pressed together, lovers fight to remain forever
Stormy hearts violent as the weather, each heart beating a hurricane
Tear drops falling faster than the rain, yet letting go of feelings of vein 
                         Heartbreak gone and can refrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/4/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/17/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. What a interesting style you have. Very creative and somewhat complex. I like this one very much.
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Date: 12/16/2011 10:35:00 AM
Did you read my "Stormy Heart? Because I wrote two years ago? Pieces are very similar.
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ashley. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:06:00 PM
beautiful passionate expressions , Ashley
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:58:00 AM
stormy emotions stormy weather, but that kissed could last forever, in blue skies or cloudy days, let's hope that love doesn't see any more rainy days. :) enjoyed reading your poem.
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